It's litteraly the ending left could rap it up next chapter but the author was like / peace out , see you never ever ever again. Hahaha . resolution ? I don't know her. Best of luck to you ! / -_-

This is good. Continue when you can.

THIS IS SO GOOD!

Oooh that’s good!
I love the ASL’s story and Luffy is so cute! And your writting is good!

SABO, YOU'RE AN ANGEL -well, kind of- PLEASE ENDURE THEM. THEY'RE WORTH IT I PROMISE TT

Am I the only one who is concern that no one except Ace wants to lecture Luffy on consequences that may or may not be irreversible? Yeah, Luffy wanted to impress his big brother but even at the cost of another big brother by pulling that kind of stunt?
He’s more concern about Ace being a “meanie” than the fact that he could have killed Sabo. (And dun say they won’t, even with plot armor common sense says a huge bear vs 3 kids who is OP as kids is still bad match up)
And ppl just sweep over that and side with Luffy?

If you want to argue that he’s 7 then fine, play that excuse. It’s just my opinion. At this point, seeing how all story want to worship Luffy, and ignore character development, I’m almost glad one of his brother died just to see him humble down a little.

Sry, I had to get it out of the system. But other than that, it’s nice to see a different ASL story.

I hope you come back to this! Thanks for posting!

i just stumbled upon this lovely story from an author's favorites-i say, they have great taste in stories! i already got hooked onto the story, so awesome to know that you updated this despite the story apparently being here since 2013! i really hope u update; this is such a good story, and i can't wait to see how it ends. author, please be well and upload the next anticipated chapter soon!

Good to hear from you again. Hard at work with life and such, huh?
It's a good chapter, definitely. Pretty hard hitting too, right in the feels. Almost seemed like everything was going to work out, then pulled the rug. Anyway, I appreciate all your hard work, both writing this, and making your way back to finish up. Goos luck with everything!

im still reading and i love this!

Sweeeeeeeeeeet!
Had to laugh so hard at Sabo just stretching Luffy's arms instead of dragging him with him

This story is so nice... I love how the tension between Sabo and Ace resulted because of the fact that Luffy was gone! Sabo, always being the mediator, is also nicely characterised. I love the way you write him! Aaahh, everything is just so wonderful! I cant wait for the next update!

whoop whoop! you've got no idea how excited i was to find that this had updated! thank you for updating it! i love this fic so so so much!

Hey :) are you gonna finish this story? If not can you alert us? Because it's a really really REALLY great story!

Are you going to update one day or just leave us hanging?