Did you ever start or finish a #3 ?

I just wish once someone would write AS a strong enough women to say RED and walk away leaving him lost as to why she rejects him. I guess if I read enough FSof G stories I might find one AS who will not submit.

Are you ever going to finish part 3.

Well. It's real the love of his parents. But, with all that possibilities and doctors and best education, they failed. They left their son on the worst person to make that work. Elena hurt and destroy for worst this little boy. Now they don't know why he can't empathize with others.

Oh por favooooooor. En serio no podrán terminar algo. Ahhhhh

These two should not end get an HEA together. Ana with someone else definitely. However, before she anything she must heal both physically and mentally. She needs to learn her self-worth and to become a strong, independent woman. Christian has done so much damage that there's no going back. For him not to be there for her now when she needs him the most in unforgivable, especially after everything he has done to her. Beating, humiliation, treating her like his submissive instead of his girlfriend, endangering her was not enough. He has to abandon her too? And why won't they contact the police? Several crimes were committed against Ana.

Overall I did not enjoy the first story but I wanted to see the end and decided to give this part a fair chance. It's not good at all. Ana is pitiful here. I like strong and assertive Ana, she is anything but that. Christian really is the monster he says he is. He has no redeeming qualities. His security team and Flynn are just as useless.

Highly disappointed with both stories...had hoped for an end...HEA.

So gutted that part III doesn't exist - whaaa! You have a great story here and I'm sure I'm not the only one really, really hoping you come back to it. Pretty please?!

I do not care if a fleet of otters are being killed with Machetes right in front of her... You really think of some killer lines. I love how you write a story ... thank you !

Ya for the home team . Now everything will fall into place i hope. Yes i know that is only in fantasy .. But this is fan fiction :)

NO !

Glad Taylor is on Team grey ! funny and fun !

I new most of the gang in the story ,BUT it was fun reading your take on everyone

I really think that Ana is loosing her sense of self. She has become the submissive she never wanted to be. Ok he is not inflicting pain by canning ect but he is dominating her. They aren’t discussing the scenes he has made his mind up as t what is going to take place.
I hope she wakes up soon because she has made their relationship all about sex and not about emotions. His dominance is even encroaching on her personal life, security until she cannot even look at anyone, contact her friends or go anywhere without their interference. No Ana is becoming totally submissive by not taking a stand and striking out for some independence.

So all that shooting is not heard or reported to other hotel guest. He must occupy the whole floor.
Get away before Kate see Anastasia and spill it all.