Well fuck me with a rusty spoon... I can honestly say that I did not expect that. Glad the fucker is dead ,but still did not see that coming.

that was a hell of a story.. it scared me how much piper has changed. really scary

Wow that was one helluva character development! I love this though.

hello. surprisingly, i like this story.
1. i liked that you turned everything dark. its sort of hot.
2. i liked how you wrote the sex scene at the beginning, you claiming to be bad at it is bull.
3. i liked that you did not make Alex's and Piper's "friendliness" painstakingly long.
and i really like the general idea of the story.

BUT, i swear you could have had created at least 10 amazing more chapters out of the last 3. i wish you could redo this story in the future. when you have time. :)

Damn. That was really good.

I just read this story. It was great. The darkness that you folded into Piper's character seemed a natural progression. Her true personality has evolved. She cares for her friends but is ruthless to her enemies. Thank you for killing off Healy and in such a completely delicious way, out the back door of the kitchen. Red's friendship certainly did come in handy. That was very clever. I'll be looking for more of your writings.

Fuck yeah, the sex scenes and darkness at the end were great

HOLY FUCKING SHIT! This is amazing! Hahaha I mean I'm even laughing at the evilness of all of it in the end! HOLY SHIT this really changed my view about Piper. Wow this was so well written. I don't know why you didn't get many reviews but you wrapped this one up pretty good. Your choice of words was excellent, the way you placed Polly with the soap thing and Red with the truck I mean that was fucking amazing. I wish you could have continued this story. Thank you for this! Shit that really was a good read even though it was short, I can't get over it because the plot twist that you made in the end was just .. Dark and cynical. Okay i'm literally going to go now:) KEEP ON WRITING OITNB! You seem to know your stuff:D well doneeeeee :*

I love this story. It was amazing and beautiful and everything a story should be!
Good job!

Damn girl that was freaking awesome! Loved every minute. Making it dark was interesting. Would love to read a sequel of them all about a year down the road from the ending here. Loved it! Great job.

Great story! Loved the end.

Awwwwwww shit.
Well, that was fucking awesome.

I love your writing. The characters were so believable and the story was really fun. I hope to read more of your fic in the future!

I love Mercy! Great chapter.

Loved this chapter.