It’s okay! It happens sometimes. I love your plot line is unique, I’ve never read a YJ story like this before! I hope you can continue! Keep up the amazing work!

Wow! That was a major plot twist! I love it eeekkkk!

By the way, I love your NCIS Gibb’s slap reference I love your work!

Sigh... I’m still hopeful you’ll come back to this story and rewrite if you have to. I loved this story would support it :)

I hope you come back to this story because I thinks it's amazing.
Please update because you are an amazing writer. Thank you

Can't wait for your next update, love the story

Are you ever going to answer us curious readers on why your oc and Rob are shipped? Because I agree with the other two. For someone who wants their oc and Rob to be a thing, you've done a terrible job building up romantic feelings. Everything feels platonic and like they just view each other as siblings.

I see nothing ever happening between the two.

Also... Have you ever stopped to think how overpowered your oc is? She just... Comes off as very Mary Sue to me. Your writing is good and I'll admit that you've done well to integrate your oc onto the team, but like... She's beyond overpowered, doesn't have a chance with Rob, and the fact she has superpowers but is a member of the batfam makes zero sense. You do realize Batman has a thing about metas in Gotham? He doesn't take them on as proteges.

Why is this marked Robin/OC there's like nothing going on between your OC and Robin. There's no chemistry, connection, no nothing. The only relationship you've developed between them is a friendly one, not a romantic one.

Sorry sorry sorry it took me so long to review but I had read other stories and wanted to re-read yours to refresh my memory which is horrible and school has been kicking my ass lately. But as for the chapter my reaction is the same as wallys mind blown I can't wait for you're next chapter and to see what dawn does to separate David from the dark crystal. I would love for you to develop robins and dawn relationship more because right now they seem like friends. But I still love your story don't ever forget that and again sorry it took me so long to review. Later:)

I will be blunt... I have no idea why Dawn and Dick are shipped. There's literally no chemistry between them, no spark, no nothing! It seems they're just shipped because you were like "Oh, Robin is my favorite so I'm going to make an OC to ship with him!" It's just not working. I can't see them ever having a successful relationship because there's nothing there. No development whatsoever.

I highly doubt Zatanna would back off. If your readers can't see anything happening between Dawn and Dick, then she wouldn't either.

Dawn's better off being single. She's a good enough OC as is. She doesn't need to even be paired. You've done well to develop her, but this Robin/OC thing you claim you're leading up to is severely lacking.

If Robin shows feelings for her out of the blue and kisses her on New Years, I might just scream. I'm not saying Dick and Dawn can't be together, but you'd think after 36 chapters there'd be more of a relationship between them past best friends/almost like siblings. They have a brother/sister relationship to me and I just can't see it ever becoming anything more. I'm sorry.

This is an awesome story, plz plz plz update and finish this story plzzzzz!

Seriously, you need to quit being awesome with your writing! It's overwhelming how much I love your work! Please update soon! Can't wait for the next chapter! And also, I have a question: Was David Dawn's first kiss? I mean after he kissed her I couldn't help but think there'd be drama because her first kiss came from a dude who currently wanted to kill her, but she barely reacted to that. So I'm just curious whether or not that was her first kiss. Keep up the great work, and keep bein' awesome!

Wow, this is such a great chapter! Now the team know about the dilemma with David (note the un-intended alliteration XD), things are bound to heat up even more, especially when they both (Dawn and David) encounter one another again. And about separating the Dark Crystal from David: I have a feeling Dawn is the only one who has the power to do that, considering she holds the Light Crystal, and all...yeah, but that's just a theory of mine.
Other than that, I can't wait for more 'Age of Shade' goodness to come, hopefully soon. Please update soon, this is getting sooooooo good, and I can't wait for more action!

I am completely hooked on this story! I'm dying to see Robin/Dick and Shade/Dawn's relationship blossom! I'm guessing it'll happen on new years like in the show with Robin and Zatanna, but hey, you're the author, that's up to you. Seriously, in my opinion they act like an old, married couple that have been in love for a lifetime. They seem like soulmates! I hope you update really soon, I'm looking forward to it!

Yay! Dawn is back for another mission! Please , oh please, oh please, oh PLEASE update another chapter soon, I can't get enough of Dawn kicking some bad guy ass!