"Today you've shown me just how incredible a person you are,"
I'd have had a question mark at the end of my thank you, actually. "Err...Thank you?"

Love this! :D

... why not just change in the bathroom?

Please update this soon, it's been quite a few months! I love this story so far and can't wait to see Luise and L's characters develop! ...Bit seriously, update soon :D

Hahah! Loved this chapter, it was very cute and funny.

Red velvet cake, ha. Always great when cafes have cake. :D

Yay! This chappy was great too!
Keep updating :*

XD Mmmmm, now I want some white chocolate and red velvet cake... Awesome chapter! Love the whole date mishap

This is great! :D
Love it :*

Hey, me again :) Yes, this chapter was as good as the other ones :D. I would say even better :) (But to be perfectly honnest, I've read a lot of other fanfictions so it's hard for me to remember the last chapters of this story xD. Just let's say that I liked (loved ?:3) this chapter)
I've laughed a lot with the story of Mello's bruise and Near's hickey. And I've laughed even more with the "gay story". And I am laughing now thinking of it xD.
Still amazing :)

Haha, sure thing! Ah, I should've realized it was more comedic than anything else…I'm so used to reading more drama-filled fics, so I viewing this story through that filter, which I should not have been doing! Sorry!

I think my main problem with this story at this point is the lack of conflict. Every story needs something to fight the happiness, even comedies. You don't necessarily need to introduce one in the next chapter, but you might want to establish a fighting force…maybe even have L go off on a case with Luise? THAT would create good conflict.

Okay, so rather than the "serious with comedic moments" path (like I'd falsely viewed this story) you're going down the "comedic with serious moments". Just make sure those serious moments are placed well, and that the serious moments themselves are good. The whole "I am that monster" deal felt forced to the tenth power, sorry. The way you introduced it was okay, but the speech…I know you wanted to incorporate that quote, but it just didn't flow right. Especially in the context; he's talking to kids who desperately want to be him. He can be brutally honest, yes, but he's also a liar. I don't think he'd say something like that to young people. (Maybe the whole monster speech, but not the part about him being one.)

I don't know.

And I didn't even consider that Crystal had a reason for being so anti-men! Ugh, stupid of me… I guess she was so quirky I didn't even think she may have been abused.

Anyway. I'm really glad you updated! Only other advice I'd give besides the above is to be write a bit more clearly; really make sure we understand what's happening and where it's happening. Update again soon!

I love this story! Update soon!

I like this story and I can't wait for the update! Keep up the good work! :-)

Yay dinosaurs are amazing! This chapter made me laugh so hard (white chocolate XD) I can't wait for the next one!

Yay you updated! *does happy dance* I like how you included the whole L speech thing. Please update soon. :)

Amazing! What do you mean 'unique review'? Cuz if I just randomly type DINOSAUR! Does that count? :)