Nice and I am a big fan of pinecest and read many fanfic of the pairing and all a see a very close sibling relationship.

that was ... AWWWWWWEEEEEEESSSSSOOOOOMMMMMEEE.

the way wendy declined i felt the same as dips because im a big BIG fan of wendip
any of ya agree?

This was a great story and I loved reading it! I also thought it was pretty accurate to the characters.

I love it please make some more!

awesome story. Love seeing Mable helping Dipper out and it was so cute with the siblings. Awesome job.

That was so cute man! I loved it! But despite the category or whatever this thing was under, it ain't

cute

aww, that was sweet! Their twin-bond is just so priceless! You should write more of these, they're adorable! :)

-Millllly

Sweet, simple, and satisfying. :) This is pretty much exactly what I was looking for when I went searching for a GF fic, something that showed the bond the twins have without pushing it into romance, and therefore it seemed perfectly believable to me. Nice work!

And yes, 'my voice cracks more than a sidewalk' was the best line. XD

This was... neutral is kinda what I do and don't want to say at the same time. This story was elongated to the quantity of the story to make it more believable it had good quality. You detailed things pretty well in here and that's a plus; but I was hoping for more drama. If you would have typed the scene of Wendy and Dipper it would've been better. I could've seen Wendy making up a BS lie to why she didn't or just being blunt with him. Leaving him the true pain of rejection from someone you love instead of a simple "no". This wasn't a bad story... it was just a boring and disappointing when it reached the climax ... I'm sorry for being blunt, but that is what reviews are for.

Bravo! Really like this one.

Awww, That was so cute! You gotta keep writing this stuff because its amazing! Keep it up! :D

For some reason, I really admired the whole voice cracks more than a sidewalk thing! And I want to see the snail hunting and have Wendy show up and-BAM! Super Mabel to the rescue!

I love this, this is so sweet and heartwarming! It was very good for your first Gravity Falls fanfic. I love their sibling relationship so much, not as lovers, (ugh) no offense or anything, ship what you want. :)
But this is really cute, and you gave me feels.