| Reviews for The Lost Master |
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  LilyTheHylian chapter 38 . 7/19 I love this! |
 rameliztwentyone chapter 32 . 7/7 The idea of Pokemon Legendaries raging for the other legendaries being defeated is outright stupid |
| rameliztwentyone chapter 31 . 7/7 Altaria is stupid. But Ash is more Stupid to have not recalled the stupid bird |
| rameliztwentyone chapter 30 . 7/7 Hello. You talk about being too young and all. About the legal matters of being underage and such. But here comes Ash training two kids with neither one’s parents don’t know where their kids were and WHO is the ADULT they were with. Not that the other kid’s parents cared, but still, there should have been a someone from an agency about kids protection giving advice or concent. You can reason that Pokemon, with kids at the age of 10 setting out on a Journey, is not realistic in the first place. But still, you brought up these protection on kids in the first place. |
| rameliztwentyone chapter 28 . 7/7 Bro I hate your OC |
| rameliztwentyone chapter 23 . 7/7 The standard of the johto league is low the that malanie girl reached the finals. Good job |
| rameliztwentyone chapter 18 . 7/6 I hate your OC and any other OC in any story. I just hate OCs in general |
| Dark3rAng3l chapter 27 . 6/8 Very epic chapter |
| Anonymous chapter 1 . 5/24 Why did you exclude gen 5 from this story? I get that you never mentioned Kalos because those games never came out yet but why did you neglect gen 5? |
| Vort chapter 33 . 4/30 Captivating read these past chapters. Love the high stakes! - Vortozan |
| Vort chapter 4 . 4/29 Awwwwwwwwwwww, Pikachu didn't recognise Ash cause he changed so much ;( This story is brilliantly made and I love the dynamics that are shown. I really am hoping for the feels to be laced in thick later on with this new changed Ash slowly reconciling with his old friends. Love love love it all! Thank you soo much for this amazing read! - Vort |
| Flumerfelt92 chapter 1 . 4/20 This is such an amazing story! |
| Storm Pegasus chapter 1 . 1/10 I wish there were more Awesome stories out there like this but so far i have not found any. this one is one of a kind. the only way to improve it would be by adding amourshipping. Otherwise its complete. |
| messengerofhell chapter 38 . 11/6/2019 Was engrossed in reading it for 3 days. Surely worth the time. |
| PastelMuffins chapter 35 . 9/5/2019 ...my life is complete...now it's time for sleep |
