Melody Senna? That's a super shitty name. Poor kid.

Eternity? Edward says hes sennas for eternity? WOW poor Bella. She will always have to live with the fact that her guy loves another woman, that when he dies he will go looking for that OTHER woman and not stay with her...poor bella.

Bella deserves better then some other womans soul mate.

Weird how in chapter 1 Senna was Edwards best friend, but in chapter 2 its Emmett.

I think the letters are super selfish, like its just a way to get Edward to KEEP thinking about her.

If this is just a rip off of the movie anyway, no thanks

if senna is Edwards soul mate, then why the fuck is this a bella and Edward story? Why should bella be #2? And whats the point of being #2 anyway? When Edward dies surely he will be reunited with Senna...cause shes his "soul mate" and where the fuck does that leave bella?

I don't want to be anyones second love. no thanks

I have two guesses
1 Senna mom got prgnant at 16 with a little girl before she had Senna & put the baby up for adoption

2 Senna got pregnant at 16 & Bella is daughter she was put up for adoption

pm me if im close lol

Please tell me there is more than 8. ch in this story its too good to hsve only a taste of it

love ur other storirs too

At least someone else saw her. I wonder if she was the nurse in the room when Edward woke up.

Can't believe nobody else has seen her. She's sitting in Sienna's haunt and nobody sees or says anything?

I keep accidentally hitting the post button before I'm done...lol
I wanted to say last chapter that Carlisle was acting strange and wonder if he knows there's a Senna look alike walking around. I'm also wondering If it's a relative of hers or sibling she wasn't aware of, or maybe was.
I think it's weird that Edward has seen this girl when everyone knows where he is...

I can't imagine losing someone close to you like that and people telling you to move on, it seemed kind of inconsiderate when Emette had said it.

I forgot to comment on the last chapter that the journal was a great idea.
I don't think emette was completely right in this chapter. Edward might not have been there for him but I don't think he was there for Edward either. Edward is the one who lost his wife and was drowning, Emette should have put down the phone and showed up to drag Edward out of the house.
Can't help wondering if the girl with brown hair is which I assume is Bella is intentionally walking by and it's being planned. I hope not even though I know it's far fetched. Did Senna have a girl picked out? If that's true the fact she looks just like her is just a bit unnerving so that's why I'm saying far fetched.

I was worried that Senna seemed to be identical to Bella and how that would play out to Bella later in the story. My apprehension was silenced some when I read that Edward was the writer and Senna played the piano. Looking forward to seeing how the story plays out. Enjoying so far.

I wondered why strangers would take someone home and not just call an ambulance...lol
Well this chapter certainly answered that question. The only thing I would have changed in this chapter which isn't really a big deal is that they would have admitted him against his will. As long as he didn't commit a crime and isn't dangerous to others or try to commit suicide making him a danger to himself then I don't think they would be able keep him unless his family wanted him kept and got a lawyer, can't take someone's rights away. I guess there are slight changes to the rules in the different states but I can't see someone being put in against their will for not eating right...etc...as I said not a big deal, just a thought.

Sounds interesting.

Edward needs to talk to Carlisle, find out what he knows. Emmett is a great friend stopping by to make sure he's okay and helping him clean up and cooking breakfast.