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So beautiful, yet so sad. The way you portrayed them made them seem more and more real. Thank you for this art. I hope to read more of your beautiful stories like this one soon.

that was cute

That was quite nice, and in character too.

...the end made a tear...

And just why can't they have each other? /

*sigh* you evil person, writing so well. Giving me a feels overload *crawls in corner and cuddles with and Aang plushie* *is smacked with a newspaper* OW! Yes I liked it! I liked it a lot...
Keep up the good work!

I love this story so much you dont even know. And the line "Oh god, what is it about you that makes me love you so much? I can't stand the fact that I…I can't have you." speaks to my soul and not many people can do that so kudos.
P.S. I'm also a fan of Reprieve

Oh no! Poor Aang and Zuko. I love the way you made the ending. Normal people like happy ones, but no one said I'm normal! HeeHee! Anyway, great job. I hope you keep writing more Fan-fics. Your plots are Very interesting!

Awww...It was great. Sad at the end but great.

I loved it! It was very good. One of the best Zukaang smut fics I've read.

( 。・_・。)人(。・_・。 )

( F ) ( i ) ( r ) ( e ) ( b ) ( a ) ( l ) ( l ) - ( F ) ( u ) ( c ) ( h ) ( s ) ( i ) ( a )

AGH! Please make another! Please please please! I can't stand it being left here! omg! This was so good! XD

I cry'd, i cry'd at the end, this was so amazing, t-that i just cry'd!
What did you do to me!
I loved this so much!

Excellent story.

That was really nice. So why can't they have each other? What is stopping them?