And this proves why Zoe is a monumental idiot. Bianca has no right to be on this quest. And her stupidity would have gotten her killed and it would have been her and Zoe’s fault completely. Zoe is undeserving of being the lieutenant. Her stupidity would have gotten the hunters killed long ago. So again it just proves Riordan to be an idiot with stupid plot points.

This chapter proves Chiron guilty of treason against the gods and it shows Zoe to be a bigger idiot than her millennia of life shouldn’t allow. Why would you bring someone with no training at all in anything on such a dangerous quest? Especially one so important. You don’t bring an untrained middle schooler with a seal team to rescue the president. That is beyond stupid and not believable for Zoe to do so when she has people with centuries of experience and teamwork available. Rick Riordan was an idiot to make anyone try to swallow such stupid bullshit.

Grrr. Stupid bitch deserved to die.
Grover the beyond useless anchor around everyone’s neck. In this story he has contributed NOTHING. Why is he here? Why does anyone trust him to accomplish anything? He is a walking disaster that has not succeeded in a single fucking thing he has set out to do without having to be rescued or assisted. Most of the time his blunders and stupidity cause more problems. Grover picked up something and then through it at talos. How fucking stupid do you have to be after being told everything is cursed? Bianca and Grover should have been killed off for their being so fucking stupid.

Percy the fucking arogant retard.
Chiron the treasonous sack of shit. Deserves Tartarus. Deserves to be beheaded after betraying Olympus. I put him in the same category as dark lord dumbledor. He is actively helping kronus by not helping Artemis and not training the demigods. Occasional archery classes pale in comparison to the brutal training the heroes of old received. When a war is brewing it is criminal to not train your soldiers to the best of your ability. He just gives up regularly and doesn’t ever try. He also keeps critical information away from everyone whose lives that information can save. Treasonous beast no better then the animal some likely call you. A true son of Kronos.
Zoe the stupid bitch deserves to be cast out of the hunters. Especially doesn’t deserve to be a lieutenant after that absolute bone head decision to take a completely untested and untrained hunter on a life or death quest where lives will be in her hands. This is a decision no leader would make when dozens of other options are available. Zoe has zero reason to include Bianca. Rick riorsan was a fucking idiot and everyone who copies his stupidity is an even bigger moron.

Bianca is a disgusting person. Glad she dies. Deserves worse punishment though.

Yeah, your “uncensored”version on the hpfanfictionarchive site is also redacted. What’s up with that?

I have always hated Bianca as a character cause of how she basically just threw her brother away that's why I always look forward to her death in stories it makes me smile she gets her comeuppance for abandoning family

These are good stories Stargate no denying it. Though personally I'm more of a fan of Dead Island(hate the fact that Jin was noted to have been raped, but was then killed at the end of the game), and Dead Island Riptide(this one is pretty dang fun specially with the fully automatic high speed firing pistols and the Semi Automatic Sniper Rifles, The only complaint I have is the Wiki claims that all of the people on it were turned into Zombies as could be heard by the "puking" sound coming from the boat at the end, only problem is that I turned the volume of my tv up and I did not hear any puking so I call BS to it). I'm also a fan of Prototype and Prototype 2.

Frankly I'm not a fan of the movies they took things way out of context. I mean Percy fought and was betrayed by Luke in the woods of Camp Half Blood, not on a freaking sky scraper.

wtf he dropped his pants?

instead of a fight and put the sexist in her place we get sexual harrasment.

Hey man for the lotus hotel this sentance is wrong. Time travels faster inside that casino than outside. It would be the opposite other wise 70 years could go by inside and only a few on the outside

ah Bianca the bitch that's how I remember her joined without thinking what it meant for her only family

Great 3rd book. Again I recommend anyone reading this to switch to hpfanfic as this author posted the uncensored version over there due to fanfics absurd rules. Awesome story another fave to you .

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