| Reviews for The Grand Journey |
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  Karen Black chapter 9 . 8/6 Great bloody chapter. I like violence by the way and I like the way you made ash a badass |
| Guest chapter 7 . 8/6 No! And I thought the dragon type move from last chapter would be dragon pulse! |
| Guest chapter 5 . 8/6 I guess it’s dragon pulse coz Charmander line can only learn outrage in their final stage, charizard, which ash’s charmeleon hadn’t achieved yet |
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/21 . that’s not how suspended animation works. suspended animation Is a state where nothing changes for better or worse not some weird half coma. |
 killernooch chapter 11 . 5/20/2019 you said he caught a primeape in an earlier chapter |
| Lord-of Oceans-Poseidon chapter 2 . 11/26/2018 Underwhelming if I am being honest. |
| M3G4N5H059 chapter 20 . 10/19/2018 Khangshadow you fucking asshole cyberbully shut up and go murder yourself! Stop yelling at me for using an OC in my awesome Pokemon Nuzlocke story and stop calling it very bad! It's me in my Real Life and I'm using my Dream Team which suits me perfectly. |
| Khangshadow chapter 20 . 10/12/2018 Give ash a drowzee |
| Tilty.bbb chapter 20 . 9/9/2018 This was a fantastic read well done |
| BendyInkwells chapter 2 . 5/3/2018 /ability/technician Technician Boosts The Power Of Moves |
| BendyInkwells chapter 1 . 5/3/2018 Was it Protect?(6) |
| Demon-255 chapter 10 . 4/28/2018 So, in the beginning segment, I have to ask. Where the heck is Jirachi? It is a legendary after all. (Even if it isn't as good as it is made out to be.) |
| Emerald Night 117 chapter 19 . 4/9/2018 Welcome back my friend! |
| reptoholic chapter 18 . 10/5/2017 thanks |
| reptoholic chapter 17 . 10/5/2017 Youg mew |
