| Reviews for Born in the Stars |
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Leafie chapter 11 . 3/5/2014 I'm guessing the black cat is Hollyleaf? |
Guest chapter 1 . 11/29/2013 Interesting so far. |
IWriteToHideThePain chapter 8 . 8/2/2013 1. That was a mistake that I'm surprised I didn't notice in till just now. Thanks for telling me. 2. In the Last Hope Jayfeather let Leafpool help him during the battle so I'm guessing he let her be a medicine cat again. Plus the clan needed a medicine cat after Jayfeather died. |
Iamimaginative22 chapter 1 . 8/2/2013 I have a two questions before I read this. (Not Criticizing Your Work) Why is Brambleclaw listed as clan leader, when his real name is Bramblestar? Can Leafpool practice medicine? I thought she was banned. (Briarlight knows medicine) |
WyldClaw chapter 3 . 8/1/2013 oooohhh! i bet moonpaw's sister is featherpaw |
WyldClaw chapter 2 . 8/1/2013 why is featherpaw feeling like that |
WyldClaw chapter 1 . 8/1/2013 oh my starclan! is it a reincarnation of jayfeather? |
IWriteToHideThePain chapter 7 . 7/30/2013 Happy early birthday! And thank you. I do have plans to give the foxes a point of view because they are no ordinary foxes but I do like your fox cub idea. If I can think of a way to incorporate it into the story I will :). |
Pumpkinfur chapter 7 . 7/30/2013 This is awesome... adding this to my list of often-checked fics! I think it would be cool though if you added a fox cub to the prophecy. Even if the fox won't be in the prophecy, you can still add its point of view just to give the story more flavor. :D MY BIRTHDAY IS TOMORROW!* :D :D :D *July 31 |
IWriteToHideThePain chapter 1 . 7/30/2013 Really? I haven't read that book in awhile. Thanks for the heads I'm fixing it now. |
Blue chapter 6 . 7/29/2013 Great Chapter! but didn't Beetlewhisker die in the "LAST HOPE" from Brokenstar? |
Blue chapter 4 . 7/26/2013 Can't wait for the next chapter |
TheTimeTravelingScientist chapter 3 . 7/26/2013 Awesomeness! I love your story so far please continue! :) |
Blue chapter 3 . 7/25/2013 Keep Writing! |
Sarah chapter 2 . 7/24/2013 I just love it please write some more |