This was a beautiful story! I loved every word! Great job on the idea, story, and writing! Thanks so much for posting it!

Oh, my heart - you made me cry. But the good kind of crying, you know? This was a beautiful story, masterfully told - you're a Story Teller of your own, aren't you?

Seriously, though, really well done. I loved every bit of it.

OMG I SKETCHED THAT FLOWER ON THE COVER PIC BEFORE! AHHH NOSTALGIA!

(ye only came here just to say that lol. Sorry for wasting your time immagonnagonowbye.)

*runs away*

Shit you made me cry! Oh but that was so good. I hate bittersweet endings but Pitch and his girl were so lovely together. Sadness :(

Wow!
You are truly good.
As I read I was drawn in so hard that when the epilogue was winding down, for the first time since I read Anne of Green Gables and Matthew died, I had tears streaming down my face. I couldn't stop them.
Thank-you for your wonderful story, even if it did make me cry.

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I loved the stories and the end was so sad. It was really good.

Nothing could of prepared me for this. I suspected it would come but I was not prepared. Throughout this entirely story I've been smiling gleefully, laughing and wondering just what story will be next. All stories must end though yes? Even though I suspected, I was not prepared for the final one. I'm literally in tears. So sweet but so sad. I congratulate you for a excellently written tale. I'm most definitely going to keep this page bookmarked so I can read again!

Awww... Ouch. My heart hurts. It was so sweet, but so sad... At least she lived a long and mostly happy life. She got to see her daughter believe in Jack Frost again, and she got to say goodbye to the people who made such a difference in her life. And she got to ask Pitch to take care of her granddaughter. Dang. Writing this review is hard. How do you congratulate someone on removing your heart with a razor sharp surgical implement and crushing it beneath their pen/keyboard while you willingly let them do it?! I'll tell you how- you write them a review. Good job!

Pitch kidnapping the girl right in front of Jack was a surprisingly satisfying ending. She's known Pitch the longest and he somehow loves her. It just fits the story that Jack thinks she's been kidnapped by a totally evil man (which, actually she has), but when in actuality, Pitch would probably be the last one to hurt her. Good job! :)

Very cute! I didn't even realize that it was the same girl, just at different times! That was very cleverly done. I tip my invisible hat to you.

Cool! My favorite part is the interaction between Tooth and Jack. It is so in character, and it makes me laugh.

Aww... So cute! I love this! Hope is such an important thing. You did a smashing job with this!

Cool! I loved North's reaction to the cookies.
"This! It. Absolute. Perfection!"
You captured his accent, his wonder, and his personality perfectly.

Cool! I like the idea of some certain adults being able to see the Guardians. And I thought it was a really nice touch for her to spread the belief to the kids. Nice job!

Very you feel tough, huh? Going around putting tears on people's faces, cause I know I didn't make these myself...great story.