and cut

Hahaha Sierra is a girl name. Waiting for more

Interesting.

Fairly clear that this was inspired by Red vs. Blue, but it's so well written I don't think even Rooster Teeth would mind.

A medically engineered host body was the only option; flash clones are notoriously short-lived, after all..

Ok, aditions to the last chapter. Atleast I feel better. Honestly, I like where it's going with Sierra, cute little girl A.I for Chief. Can't wait to see where you take this, if this isn't the end of it, of course.

What the fuck in god's name? ...Now I see where that rampancy went... and maybe Cortana liking crazy...and the child side of her... OK SOMEONE TELL ME WHAT THE FUCK IS GOING ON WITH THIS FRAGMENT!?

Well wonder how this will be for cortana and chief knowing that there is an knowing that an entire tenth of of cortana is living in chief's head only time will tell cool story peace

That...was perfect. It completely filled in the gap between the two sections, and did so in a wonderfully touching way. Everything makes sense again in this chapter!

I love how you wrote Sierra in this version. The duel nature of her personality was much more pronounced. As was her endearing tendency to ask innocent, yet very perceptive questions. She really came across as a much better developed character than before.

The ending was also a lot more satisfying than before. Every character seemed to react more realistically, and with more thought put into considering the pros and cons of different actions. This is a *vast* improvement from the previous one, which had only exacerbated the gap in story progression.

Altogether I'm really impressed with this. You did good.

Sierra is so adorable _

A really good unique story, this last chapter was really cute. I'm hoping that you're gonna update soon.

I love this story thank you for existing thank you

So corthana left a piece of herself behind to run a ship test and now a piece of her is now living on the ship and she's a trickester by the looks of it this should be fun cool story peace out from reach remember

Awesome chapter!

Amazing story can't wait for more

...What? What just happened?

Why would the Chief be willing to risk destabilizing Cortana? And how did he go from "Siera's insanely annoying" to "I'm willing to endanger my love's psychological well-being by intentionally and knowingly advocating against her having a unified mind"?

The Chief has one opinion at the beginning of the chapter, and another at the end of the chapter, without much of anything to tie them together. It feels like an entire section of the chapter is missing! What remains is pretty good, but it doesn't really make any sense to me.