well explained a little fun see what happens next .

LITTLE confused what is happening here .

So the 'Naturals' kicked the augmented off Earth? What happened to the Naturals and Earth here? There's been no mention of them, have they even developed FTL and left Earth? A little more fleshing out of the history, both of Earth and what happened with the Citadel, is needed. This could be a good fic, from the looks of it, but it's being held back at the moment because we are having to second guess every paragraph and try to work out how we got to where we are.

I'd nearly forgotten this story existed, it's been so long. Please try not to keep us waiting that long again.

6666 words in 9 mounths, it would be shameful is your wriing style was not that plaisant and the plot didn't have such a potential...
i won't ask to hurry but... yeh, hurry!

Glad this story is still alive. Though I don't really see any Deus Ex elements worth noting. But if you consider it as strictly Mass Effect fic then its pretty good.

Does the Normandy still look the same? The canon one was a turian/human hybrid has the Quarians and Krogan influenced the design? Did Jensen go to space with the others or did he die before that happened? has human augmentation extended their lifespan? are they working on a cure for the genophage? Wrex has a augmented eye is augmentation common among the Krogan/Quarians? Is their a way to fix the Quarians immune system using augments?nanites? How do augs effect biotics? do they make them stronger? easier to manipulate? I know i'm throwing out a lot of questions but i think your story could be really great! hope you update soon.

so only the augments went to space? what happened to the rest of humanity? did the prothean tech make their augments better? do they still need neuropozyne? would like a bit more about first contact with the quarians and the krogan. did the relay 314 incident happen with the turians? like the story so far! just need more information.

Keep it up!

I find this extraordinarily interesting, and hope you update soon :]

Please update soon! :)

Another Deus Ex crossover! Finally! Only real issue I have with this so far is that there isn't enough of it. Write more!

Interesting. But Wrex is a bit OOC. As I see him, he is not one to feel guilty about sending someone on the road to battle glory. Even if said someone has a very different opinion of that road.

Very good beginning! I hope you continue it soon.

I am looking forward to this story. It is looking very promising. I'm hoping it will be the best yet.