| Reviews for Ventus |
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QueenEvie chapter 3 . 1/23/2018 Actually Ventus is Latin for wind. |
howlingwolffate chapter 12 . 11/2/2012 you should make more soon! _ |
Yugi's sister death chapter 12 . 6/27/2012 If kibia rapes yugi im feeding him to my hell hounds and daemon cats |
andysanime chapter 12 . 12/5/2011 GOod job so far. |
i'll Never tell chapter 12 . 3/22/2011 Finish the story! |
I'll Never tell chapter 7 . 3/22/2011 Bakura/Ryou/Yugi NOT Yami/Yugi I have nothing against the pairing but it doesn't work for this fic. |
Cherry chapter 1 . 3/8/2008 PLEASE UNDATE! I really really hope this will turn out a Bakura/Ryou/Yugi all to the end! I want more Yugi action. and less Bakura/Ryou and more Bakura/Yugi I hope you have not left this story coz it's so good! . |
MULAN-IFUWEREGAY chapter 12 . 2/28/2008 update soon |
Ireina Kurotsuki chapter 12 . 10/30/2007 Gah! You can't just leave it there! Seriously though, please update! I have my suspicions about who's controlling Yami, and I can't wait to see if they're right! A very good story, and I can't wait to see how it turns out! Smile _ ~Ireina |
shadowrealm818 chapter 12 . 10/30/2007 This is a good story update please |
CosmicEssence chapter 12 . 5/22/2007 This is pretty cool. Though you keep contradicting yourself with the rape/ innocent business of why Yami Yugi wants them. You said that Yugi wasn’t a virgin and by non-con already so how does he fit into the equation. Damn it all deffo shouldn’t have left Yugi on his own in Japan, way stupid idea there! Ryou’s jealousy is good, and is it just me or does Bakura seem more clingy and alive round Yugi? Love those scenes! Then again love the Kura/Yugi pairing lol _ Need some more of that and Ryou/Yugi too! The zoo scene was cool, the all night hold by Bakura of Yugi and the scene before they left for the museum and airport. Yugi’s in trouble with Seto right, since he has got to have something to do with all this? And is ’s ki partly somehow still in Japan even though the spirits in Africa? Or something? Whose controlling them though and are you ever going to come back to this? You can’t leave it there, it’s too exciting. Oh but you should format it better, you know put in spaces and not clump things together so much. It makes for a very difficult read otherwise! |
shrimpi chapter 12 . 1/2/2006 AHH! KILL SETO!KILL FREAKY SETO! *hits Seto over head repetivly with bat* DIE! -_-' ...oh. *hides bat look innocent* hehe. *runs and hides* ook um very good story, if you keep it up. i love this new personality you did on Rishid. haha, made me laugh my ass off. i'll add this story to my alert list and you better not stop writing to it. and i'll keep reviewing to the chapters now, can't believe i didn't find this story earlier. werid... mcl |
silverkitcat chapter 12 . 8/25/2005 Interesting story! What is controlling him? If I were yugi I'd run back to Isis. Keep going! |
ladygodess chapter 12 . 7/23/2005 i liked it, poor Malik. Well Yami finally fell off the band wagon -_- hope to read more update soon .~ |
aquastar bluemoon chapter 12 . 5/12/2005 i really love this stry but i cant find the link to the lemon *pout* |