Do you have an automail transmuted sword b cause I think the ending just stabbed me in the heart

I like the plot. But I don't like the OC. She's WAY too submissive. Izumi is right. She's a coward, has no backbone, and just let's everyone roll over her. She really is the type of person to advoid confration! And it makes no sense! If she was a pacifist, I would get that, but she isn't. For fuck's sake, shout, yell, get angry! Urgh! She kind of reminds of Shinji from Evageleon. Feli is pathetic! What's the point of her character?! She's NOT interesting! She just drags her feet around with a 'poor me' attitude. I have seen any OC as pathetic and cowardly as Feli. I'm enjoying the plot, not the character.

"Hello, young one."

Upon reading this line, the mood was violently and brutally murdered. Instead of Truth saying these words, my mind replaced him with All Might. And now this will be true of anyone else who reads this comment, and then looks at that line.

This seems like a really good story but it just seems unbelievable to me that a 13 year old would wake up to find that she's lost 3 limbs and has been unconscious for 4 months in an anime world with no idea how to get back to her family and her NOT freak out. Like I love the writing but it would've developed your character more if we saw her have a panic attack at losing BOTH her arms, her leg, and her world or something. Like I read that other than like one line she didn't have much of a reaction to her limbs and to add to that Winry was almost scolding her for just that and it completely broke my focus. Like all I could think about was how much I would be completely losing it if I lost even just one arm, not to mention the other stuff she's going through. Again this story seems interesting and I can't wait to keep reading but for future reference I would suggest writing your characters as if you were personally going through the experience to make it more realistic and identifiable with the reader. That's just my opinion though and no one else seems too bothered by it so idk maybe it's just me.

Rip Mr Suicide Fly

I love Felicity. I really do.

"STOP TRYING TO HUG ME, MUSCLE MAN!"

*STARES* ...

You know what else has been passed down in the Armstrong family for generations?

MY MOM!

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The irony is that I've never actually watched Regular Show.

When I started reading this story, I had low expectations after the first chapter but was curious enough to keep going. By the end of the second chapter, I was truly enjoying this story. Before I knew it, I found myself bringing through the whole thing while grinning in glee!
:D This story is a MASTERPIECE! It has an intriguing plot that grabbed my interest with each paragraph, making me hungry to find what happens next. Its characters are all likable and realistic. It told an amazing tale about adventure, trust and survival. Its main character grew so much without becoming O.O.C., her struggles ensuring she developed both physically and mentally.
There really are no words adequately enough to describe this excellent story! Thank you so much for writing it!

All the twists in this story are such shocks and exciting yet at the same time make perfect sense! :D

Felicity's slow, realistic growth throughout this fic has been a joy to see! :D
You truly are a highly skilled writer!

You have done a magnificent job with the plot and characters throughout this story! :D

I'm shocked that this first person to learn the full truth is Hohenheim, of all people, yet it makes sense because it's harder to tell hard truths to friends whose trust has been lost.

Yeeeah, Felicity should have just stayed far away from the Elrics in the first place! But if she had done that there wouldn't be a story so...

From beginning to end, this chapter demonstrates how much of a realistic self-insert Felicity is! :D

The shenanigans in this chapter are HILARIOUS! :D