Haha loved the ending! This is such a fun read ;D

I love the ending! It was a fish all along!

I have been looking for this fic for LITERAL YEARS. It was one of the first fics I read when I found , before I had a profile and then I finished and then I got a profile and then I couldn't find it again. I did find it genuinely enjoyable when I read it, though, and I intend to give it a re-read.

Oh my god that ending...! Absolutely perfect! Hahaha Happy will have bragging rights for all eternity now.

I don't know how you did it, but you somehow managed to make Natsu both in character and OOC at the same time. The whole premise of Natsu being nervous was off, but his reactions and decisions were so spot on. Great job!

you r a genius...this entire story is a comedic masterpiece...brilliant prose as well..haven't laughed this much in quite a while...i wish someone would make an anime for this..mind blowingly good

I've never read a story like this, told in small vignettes but it was really fun! You made me laugh very hard!

Oh my poor poor Natsu. After all the embarrassing things that he'd went through, who will guess that a simple sweet manner could charm a girl completely. Girls is a confusing human being, yes? :p
I totally had a lot share of laugh throughout this story. Natsu is so cute.

Natsu is very unlucky... or maybe he is lucky no one know is him who wrote the letter? (Mira and Erza) XD

Neither I am XD That a way to die, by laughing too much.

Females also hunt in packs, but I think that is called shopping XD

I love this story. XD Lucy face could be so funny...

That scene could be epic, I can't stop laughing after thinking of Natsu expression after being flied away by a giant tentacle after the moment XD

Huh, did they get together or...? I'm confused! But that was a perfect way to end it!

m... I coulnd't.. it was.. i mean.. what?

this is the cutest story ever wow haha !