lol tifa smirking at her boyfriend yes cloud yes your cowgirl mountain guide is climbing my favourite mountain

tifa hissing shouting yelling at saying telling to her boyfriend cloud next time i will be naked

This is so beautiful! Nice job.

tifa saying to cloud see you finally have real friends and a woman who wanted you for so long not my fake friends who had abandon me on mount nibel

Tifa to cloud when I said you should open up yourself more I meant your pant boxers or briefs âs well

I absolutely love all the emotions in this piece! from sadness at the beginning to lust and love at the end. It's really one of the FFVII story that touched me the most. Awesome writing skill! kiss!

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Aw, this was so sweet and touching. x3

So cute and touching!
Love it so much ##

This was pretty good. For your first lemon, I really enjoyed it. I don't think you dragged it out too much at all. Though it was pretty feelzy at the start..made me want to give poor Cloud a hug. ;u;

This is a beautiful interlude. Deeply emotional, without being sappy, and the raw honesty of it is moving. Well done.

This is so nicely done, and Cloud and Tifa I love it to bits
Also, that last line, nuff said.

I don't even like Cloud/Tifa and this was perfect. The actual lemon was well done - not too long and not too short. It was very, very good. You should be proud of this.

aren't lemons supposed to have 0 plot? It was very sweet throughout the whole thing, I liked it.

I think that it was great, good job really liked it :)