This was pretty amazing!

I loved this, and your take on Cosette was great!

Gosh, I really love the way you've written Cosette here. She is usually such a mild-mannered character that it feels really good to see her confronting her biological father and getting justifiably angry at him. I love how she refers to Valjean as her real father, and the part where she shows Felix the scar on her arm, which shows that she has accepted that the abuse was not her fault. Really wonderful work. I'll probably stick this on my list of Cosette-centric favorites. :)

This story was AWESOME! Amazing! I've never seen an idea like it, and it was executed amazingly. The idea of half-siblings was awesome. Also, the idea that Felix -as he always does- once again convinces himself that it was nothing, was awesome.

That was really good. I like how you wrote Cosette. Please continue this into something more. I belive you have something here.