AMAZING

Hello.

So I know it's been years since you posted this, but I still wanted to appreciate the talent and creativity that went into this story.

I don't necessarily read fanfiction, especially one of this length, but the second I finished the first chapter, I couldn't stop reading. I finished the whole thing in probably 30 minutes, and I loved every second of it.

Incredibly well written, and pulled at just the right heart strings and emotions at the right time. I must admit, some parts were, predictable, but it was still surprising and amazing nonetheless.

Thank you for creating this story. Even though I came here for a different reason, I came out a fan of your work, and you may actually see me again reading your works in the future.

Hope you've been doing well these last 6 years since you posted this~ Well done!

Boi

I love this story. I love the concept of this story. And despite the fact that it’s shorter than most Auslly fanfics, it was still great. You should probably go back and edit so spelling mistakes and such but otherwise, great story!

Really good!

This story was so BEAUTIFUL OH MY GOD.

I'm in love with this story

This was an Awesome and Amazing story!

Keep up the Awesome and Amazing work!

this shit is really fun but spice it up more

U remember reading this at the age of 13 and now at almost 17 I understand it so much more I just find it so funny it's been forever since I have read it and but honestly tho I enjoyed it at all ages but now I look at ally and the character in this story and go omg that's so me cause only these kinds of things are situations I would find my self in and it makes me laugh like my life was picked out of some book I was reading the end of the first chapter and I genuinely laugh so hard the construction work look at me like I was a werido just want u to know u cause me an awkward situation

I'm litterally dying..Just the disturbing fact is that the people writing this are probaly all 12 and being like"mommy told me this is what happens"

"He had a point, I guess. I had been aimlessly driving back and forth since I started playing Mario Kart. Now I was repeatedly slamming my go-cart into a wall.

Fun."

Reading this story for like the billionth time and I always laugh out loud when I read this part! Amazing!

Im literally crying right now

I loathed the doofus from the start.

To be honest, Ally ruined everything. What she should've done was turn the situation in Elliot. Be like "just because I don't like you, you decide to spread these lies about me. You're pathetic" When that bitch called her a whore; she should've denied not confirmed