Love this

This story had so much promise, if only it didn't have the overpowered, perfect Mary Sue OC. This story should be marked as having an OC along with Claire and Sylar, it's misleading otherwise.

Oh, my goodness there hasn't been a single thing I haven't like in this story. You've made me cry, and laugh and cringe. You have written this story so well, I absolutely love it. The story line so far is phenomenal. Also, I totally see Peter as a nerd too! I love all the little references you have put in here. This story has made me laugh so much. Thank you!

Absolutely loved it! Thank you so much for writing this.

Are you going to write on the sequel again? With the time portals
I really love the stories!

This was really enjoyable. Very good read...

okay so you've added a Mary sue and neutered sylar, lovely.

Hello, I'm really enjoying your story so far. You're a good writer. But you should know Jackie's last name was Wilcox. Keep at it!

You know I should really thank you
Not only did you write wn awesome fic but, while I read it out to her, it finally helped me convice my girlfriend too watch heroes

Also if you need ideas for powers, im could come up with some if you ask (already formulated another four)

Thanks again, ill go read the sequel now

This is some the greatest fan-fiction I've ever read and I will certainly read the sequel!

OMG I BLOODY LOVED THIS FIC! And thank GOD I stumbled upon this during the weekend. I could not imagine having to be up and working in less than 5hours. Ah! So good!

I KNEW IT! Brilliant!

Okay, yes drama ending; but baby purchasing bro bonding time! Loved it!

I don't know what kind of disturbed person I am, but wow do I love emotional rollercoasters and uncertainty!

Lay it all out Peter! That's right!