AHHHH their proposal is going to be so cute! I love this story and how you write the characters

Wow, you're a great writer!
You have a great understanding and portrayal of the characters and how they would react, a nice balance of action and dialogue, and so much more. Please finish more of your work, I want to see how you bring it all together.

WHAT?! YOU HAVE TO FINISH! I always hated that Merlin and Freya never got to be happy. Please at least finish the proposal scene, I want to see/read Freya saying yes even when Merlin's clumsiness comes out at being a nervous wreck.

to be continued

Hi! I'm reeeeeeeeallllllllllllly LOVING this! This type of story is EXACTLY what I was looking for when I looked up "Freylin parents family proposal" lol
Looking forward to the next chapter, whenever it comes!

Those ages were mostly in noble marriages, there has been no time in history, where it was the norm for all classes, that the groom was much older than the bride.

I don't think that's how the magic work, there has to be a connection for the trade to work, that's why it was Ygraine who died to make Arthur, it's why Nimueh took Hunith, and it's why the Druids had one of their own give their life for Leon, you can trade lives other than your own, but they must be someone you treasure.

I've read this story a few times, but I noticed something new this time around or already noticed it and forgot I noticed it before: Old English mushed words together like you did all the time because it had a small vocabulary. Just saying.

Wonderful!~~~

I've enjoyed reading thissooo that proposal?

I'm really excited for the proposal! This is definitely my favorite Balinor-centric fic!

You've been gone a while. Hope you're doing well.

Please please please continue!

Ever going to finish this?

I'll love you when you update but for right now. I hate you.

Oh you evil person you. Leaving all of us hanging on such an evil cliffhanger wondering if Merlin Will ever gather up enough courage to propose to Freya and how he plans to go about it. ;)

I see it's been over a year since you last updated this wonderful story, but I hope some day the muse strikes you to continue again. But when the inspiration comes to you. I know how interests can change & life happens. So no worries.