I don't normally read stories with OC's but this is hitting the right notes.

Great chapter, as per usual. :)

Love it. Can't wait for more

Bow tie power is secretly illegal in 400 galaxies. Huh. No wonder the doctor is called GET OFF THIS PLANET! Any who, you are a amazing writer,and this story makes me soooo happy. I get emotional too sometimes,and it helps to focus on things that you are good at and that make you smile. My dear and WRITE MORE! Seriously. The Doctor told me to tell you! Now, were did i put my dog,k-9? I swear he was right next to the lump of metal that was my Dalek...

OMG i luv it! you have amazing talent. write more!

Please update!

Hi friend, nice to see you back. This chapter was pretty dang good considering its length, keep it up.

Great story! a few typos here and there, but still, 9/10! Please continue!

I really like your Story. Please continue.

You know, in someways the TARDIS sort of resembles Hogwarts, at least your version of it. And i like that it has its own park; I've often thought that it should have at least a garden or something.

Cute chapterlet. It should be fun to hear about the different rooms of the TARDIS.

I can't think of a thing I'd want to add to the chapter. Itwas perfect! And its funny to see the Doctor so confused about the doctor who merchandise.

I like the chapter, but I'd rather have a David Tennant lookalike if its all the same to you;)

ah, it is you again. interesting development. it's TARDIS, not tardis

Well, hi!

I thought the Doctor's response to the poster and the Dalek was pretty funny... The characterization is better than I've seen in most stories for him, but could maybe use a bit of sprucing up. Write him until he begins writing himself:-)

But hmmm... I'm wondering' when April's gonna tell him.