Darn. I went to reread this story and it’s gone. Good luck with your publishing of original work.

WHERE ARE YOU? HOW COULD YOU LEAVE THIS BRILLIANT STORY DORMANT?!

UPDATE SOON!

Oh please don't leave us hanging here you got to write more please please please can't wait

GUESS WHO'S BACK FOR A BRAND NEW ... REVIEW?! xD

Aaah...How I loved that scene in the movie ! It's great to read it in your story.

WHAT?! Why did you cut it ! I mean... WHY THERE! xD I was ready to read more T.T

I'm pretty sure the ring will come in handy for this upcoming fight. I wish she will be able not to use it but well... My hopes are not up xD

Damn another cliffhanger ending! But I love the White Council fight.

oh please update i cant wait to see lishka make her stand up :D

Wow, you've made another magnificent chapter once again! The White Council comes to aid Lishka and free Gandalf from the clutches of Sauron and the Nine Ringwraiths and are certified Badasses!

It was heartwarming to see Saruman defending his niece and brother at Sauron that he really did care for family. If this were a movie (or Sir Christopher Lee was saying that line, may his soul rest in peace and his legacy lives on), it will be twice as awesome. But please don't make Saruman join Sauron in the sequel just for power and domination over Middle-Earth, it would tearjerking that his heartwarming words of defense for Lishka and Gandalf in retort at the Dark Lord would have been meaningless and a spit in the face to the family he came to love and care for if he did that just for the One Ring. Please don't let that happen. I beg of you... :'(

Looking forward for the next chapter. Hope Lishka fights her way out of Dol Guldur with Gandalf and return to Erebor as soon as possible.

Great story as always. :D

I love this story so much. It is by far one of my favorite books I have ever read! I will follow it until the end! :)

I'm sorrryy ! I'm late ! I still had papers to turn in despite the fact that my finals were over u.u And then I kinda caught up with all the episodes of my tv shows I haven't been able to watch..
ANYWAY, as I said to you : let's review the s*** out of this chapter xD

First of all : OMG ! Thanks for your dedication ! I didn't read it when you told me, I told myself "Save it for when you're free of any college work" so I'm so happy (again!xD). And you know what ? You've been a great friend and supporter too ! Your words of encouragement were really helpful through this mess that was the end of my school year :)

SO ! Let's review for real :
I had to re-read the last chapter because it has been such a freaking long time *frowns menacingly*. You should consider doing a "Previously, on The Unexpected Wizard Apprentice..." !

Ahah ! When you wrote "The potential of fellowship betwen Men, Dwarves, Elves etc" I was like : FELLOWSHIP OF THE RING ! HELL YEAH ! XD

Don't laugh but the sentence Sauron says after she spoke about fellowship and all was SO GOOD I had to try and act it like I was an actress doing a movie. And damn that sounded well ahah ! I probably sucked but in the moment I deserved an Oscar just like Leonardo DiCaprio ! XD

BEWARE my dear, you're supposed to give copyrights now for vantablack xD

Well... That was intense, for a moment I thought Sauron was just going to throw her into a pit! I really like the fact that she wasn't able to fight him because...Come on ! It's Sauron we're talking about ! She can't do this alone, she's not powerful enough...YET!

And TELL ME THAT'S GALADRIEL !? *-*

Nice work as always ! Keep going!

Oh no, Lishka! But I bet Galadriel just showed up to kick some major ass, so I think they'll come out of this unscathed...hopefully.
Sauron was delightful in this chapter...*sigh* me and my villains. I love to hate them.
Great chapter, of course, and I'm so happy you updated! Hope you're doing well, and take care! xx

Loved that sauron appeard and that the had their little fight. But who came to her rescue? Interested to see it. Also the fact that the ring stayed with her when she asked it to was amazing. Excited for more. Hope you'll be writing more regularly. This story is great.

Madam,
Where did you go? D: I want more! D:
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*screeches* ARGH, THE INTENSITY
This story has taken many unexpected turns, but this one about Pallando's return I did not see coming at all - bravo for the surprise!
I'm excited to read more and see where this will take us...don't keep us waiting for too long ;) xx

GREAT! I like the explanation you gave about how she can be there :)

LOOOOOOL ! I hope Pallando didn't see TOO MUCH XDDDD Poor Kili...how embarrassing !

That is SO cool that Kili was able to do this with the help of Pallando. But seriously, what is he now ? We know he's been blessed and so he can do magic only if he's touched by an Istar but is there more to it that meets the eye? Has he got powers of his own ? SO MANY POSSIBILITIES :O

I really thought Pallando was going to wipe Thorin's memories out regardless of Kili's wish. I kind of wanted her to do so because I don't think Thorin can come back from the sickness on his own...

Anyway ! Good job as always, and the length of your chapter was good. I think a little bit longer would have been nice but making them a bit shorter than the ones you made before is great (my eyes thank you xD)

Where to begin...I just binge-read this entire story up until today and Oh My Gosh! AMAZING! I am thoroughly impressed with the attention to detail and the many facets of this deeply engrossing tale. I can honestly say that, without being ashamed, your story has sparked the begins of a story for myself! I am very impressed with the dedication to keeping with the true histories of the races and any embellishments are additional supports for this world you've constructed. I adore the love story between Kili and Lishka and the brotherly bonds you've been so diligently trying to bring to the surface. In the end it's all about family, right? I'm sooooo happy that Tauriel and Legolas get a shot! YAY! No offense, but that Tauriel/Kili love plot was just not doing it for me lol
Overall I'd have to say you've kept a very consistant and steady flow of time with the tale, the additional days spent in Rivendale, with Beorn and in Mirkwood make the pass of the journey much more believable since, in truth, the entirety of the hobbit (at least in book form) spanned a year. And I soooooooo loved the Midsummer scenes! The tournament and the acrobatics (I often thought that dwarves would be the acrobatic type, what with the mining and such, but that just blew my mind!) made my day! You truly are talent and I am so glad I've chosen to follow this story! I cannot wait to see what lies ahead for the little fox and her Prince.
Note: Her parents and their personas are interesting to me, even so much as in this chapter, when Pallando respected Kili's wishes-shows that, even in her current state, she made a choice to NOT force her will. I cannot wait for the next part! OH! And Fili and Sigrid-this is AMAZING! I clapped out loud! and made several people stare at me...probably shouldn't read engrossing fan fiction at work, but, eh, who cares!