I still check back here every month or so. I still hope so see more of this again some day. Thank you for creating an amazing fantasy

I was overjoyed when I saw this story had updated! Can’t wait for more!

Holy shit she's a zoroa!

You've done it again! Another chapter and a good one too! I loved the interactions between the two and the jokes were great! Then there was the action scene! That went really well! You did a great job of portraying what was happening and how the characters felt about (sort of with Dewott). Overall, a very good chapter. The ending quip was quite humorous.

Sincerely, your fellow author,
mocksteven

So here we are again. It's always such a pleasure. Remember how you tried to crush my heart. Oh how I laughed and laughed, except you weren't laughing. Under the circumstances you've been shockingly great!

But seriously, this stories fantastic! Plus, you've done a lot of things I've never read before! I like the berry thing, and the Zorua thing. In addition, your character development is pretty on point! Mostly though, I'm glad you're back; if only for a little while. Your story is wonderfully well written and the plot... I actually mostly forgot it... but there is also the fact that you are one of the few authors that actually kept me from predicting what was going to happen! You are surprising, innovative, and charming in your writing and I am honored to have been able to read this much!

Sincerely, your friend, and fellow author,
Steven Hill

This was fricken adorable really love Eevee, seems really cuddly. It's actually really great how you did this, I doesn't just give a personality to the Pokemon in battle but gives them actually character, which is really refreshing.

Just read the first chapter, and seeing as there are 34 i doubt that you will pay any attention to this but my burning desire righr now is to know, is this a real hack or not?

Hey, just wanted to let you know this is my favorite Pokémon fanfic on the entire site! Even with the current chapter count, I keep reading it over and over again, it's THAT good. Of course, it's been a long while since you've updated, but that's alright! I'm just waiting for what's gonna happen next! :33

Yay! You're back! Good to see that you didn't let the CU cunts win! Glad to see the story's back really enjoyed it, missed serenity a lot :D

Wow, I remember the last time this updated... that was a long time ago. But I saw it on the list for newly updated and I was, well, a bit shocked. I thought this story was abandoned! Maybe u should look up a few more of those old stories I thought were abandoned to... haha. But, anyways, it's good to have you and Soupy back. Sorry for not reviewing before, I didn't find much wrong with this story. Have fun and keep updating, please.

Yeah it does violtate a rule, but do I give a fuck? Nope. Now Critics United will, and those butthurt fucks will take down a really good fanfic over bullshit reasons.

Other than that, love the fanfic.

are the updates monthly or is he\she just taking awhile

I am not sure what to think of this story. 14 chapters in (12 with the way you're numbering it) I can say that I'm invested in it but I don't know if that's a good thing...

Lets start with the technical stuff... I didn't notice anything wrong. Your editor did a good job proof reading your work. I doubt I'll find any mistakes in the future.

Now for characters, beginning with the protagonist. At this point, I've forgotten her real name so I'll just call her Meri like everyone else in the world she was thrust into. Speaking of which, the cursed sapphire cart still intrigues me. Will I ever get any explanation on that? Ah, I'll just keep reading to find out.

Anyway, Meri seems to have adapted quite nicely as of this chapter. She seemed a bit too over confident in her knowledge of the pokemon world and I'm glad she was humbled by various events earlier in the story, like meeting her painfully more competent companion.

Jumping from that topic, lets look into Serenity, who is, by far, the biggest contributor to the plot (in more ways than one). She has looks, skills, and an incredible thirst (I mean, seriously, how horny can that girl be?). She's pretty straightforward girl who says what she thinks, no matter how people react, and I can respect that. Still though, there's a lot I don't know about her. Things that I actually want to know. I can tell that she and the old Meri were really close, maybe even in-a-relationship-but not-really close. What else?

On the topic of the old Meri, or the Meri who was originally from Hoen, what happened to her? Who else is related to her? Why did she have an obsession with fire type pokemon? More and more questions to keep me invested in this story about how a girl was sucked into the pokemon world.

And what a world you seem to have made it. It feels a whole lot more alive than the anime or video games ever made it feel. Everything makes sense. Sure, a lot of stuff seems to have been borrowed from the Special manga, but that isn't a bad thing. You incorporated them into your world and it fit.

All of it is good, yet I still feel... unsure about my feelings about this fic. Maybe its because of the fact that the current Meri isn't really a part of that world. Maybe its the growing sense of dread of the point in which Serenity finds out that the Meri she's with is not the Meri she knew if and when that happens. Maybe its the nagging suspicion in the back of my mind none of what's happening is actually real.

Either way, I always find myself hovering my mouse to the next chapter button, hesitant to continue even though I know I'm gonna click it anyway. Perhaps I'll feel better if I keep reading...

Till my next review

Wait is this a girl x girl story? If so then it needs to be put in the description box. I don't mind it but it keeps catching me off guard.

Thankfully quite a few things were answered in this chapter in reference to my last review. Though I do not take any of my words back I do apologize that (after rereading it) it sounded like a flame. I was kinda feeling hot headed after the last chapter and spent my energy making a hasty review without reading ahead.. I was in no way insulting the story but only making observations on the main OC. I know that you probably haven't read my review yet but I feel the need to apologize after making the last review. Writing or even reading flames makes me feel terrible so yeah...

Anyways, I'm surprised Hunter is willing to stay with them after his life and pokemon were put into serious danger without a valid reason as to why Meri was going after the necklace in the first place.