This was such a great alternate take on Neverland! Thank you for sharing! :)

I’m so glad Emma could finally let it all out with Neal.

This concept of switching Emma and Henry’s places, and her having to get him to believe is so brilliant and I love how it’s playing out.

I’m loving these Killian and Snow interactions. Can’t wait to see what happens with the lost ones!

Super cool to get a chapter from Killeric’s pov! ;)

So glad that Eric’s inner pirate has been triggered.

I love that Killian has insights as to what’s going on with Emma! And I’m glad he’s at least trying to think rationally about Tink!

NOO GUYS DONT TRUST TINK!

Ooh intriguing!

I think it was a great idea to write a cursed Killian with a different personality than the one we know and love. Can’t wait to see how Emma and Eric’s relationship evolves.

Having an other Neal and other Regina be together raising Henry was so unexpected! And Henry’s fear of Emma was so sad and painful. I’m glad that version of Killian is there to help Emma.

AHHH PLOT TWIST

I’m excited to see how the addition of Tink plays out!

Loved the heart-to-heart in this chapter!

This was a great story, I enjoyed it. I liked the way you wrote Neverland, it was descriptive and different. The plants and animals all seemed truly menacing. The curse was very good. It didn’t seem possible for Emma to resolve it at one point, when her only friend was Eric and she had to hide from Regina. I was surprised at Tink as the villain but it worked and the way .Emma ended Tink and the Shadow was very good. Rumple actually helping and Killian respecting him was also very nice. It’s not that common in OUAT fic but in this story they had the same goal. I loved Henry and Emma’s true love kiss. I like that you let Neal live, that was good for Henry, and Emma got closure with Neal. Killian and Emma together, with a baby on the way, a wonderful delightful ending. Thanks for sharing.