Omgomgomg please don't leave it like that!
I love this series so so much.
Legit thought she was dead. Please continue!

Oh wow, Cell actually shows some emotions...not surprising, really. Every being he is created from had emotions, after all. He is a mixed-clone, not an android.

This story is so good...it doesn't matter that the updates take a long time. It's worth the wait!

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Aww, Lark and Sleet. I’m glad they got each other’s backs. It’s nice to see Sleet have a growing relationship with someone on Earth besides Cixi. He probably needs other things to focus on that’s not exclusively about fighting Cell. Honestly, all the characters could use a break from him for a moment. XD
Omg, the ending, though... What the hell is going on? I’m already freaking out, man! :O I gotta say, there was something very satisfying about watching Cell begin to lose his sh**. The whole passage on Desolus was top notch for all the pent-up feelings running through these characters lately. This chapter was aptly named. XD

I think you sell yourself short. This chapter was amazing, and this story has been amazing from the very beginning. I’m just happy to see that you’re still writing, with all the crazy stuff going on in the world right now, and it’s okay if you feel a bit strapped for ideas or just want to focus artistically on other projects. Sometimes it’s best to just step away from something for a moment to get yourself refreshed. Don’t be so hard on yourself. You make good work.

I like it:) I hope you didn't abandon this story
I'll follow

It was a very good chapter. I really like Orey because she is easily relatableas a reader, you can really feel that, despite Cell’s temporary absence, she still is his prisoner. As long as he breathes, Orey won’t be free from her ordeal. I know Basil loves her dearly and won’t let Cell terrorize Orey any longer; I fear he would get killed because of this :sigh on:. Will this woman ever get a break ? :sigh off:
Even though it lasted for a few seconds, I am glad Cixi gave the Bug man a taste of his own medecine. Things are starting to get really serious for both of them.

I hope the lockdown and Covid-19 wasn’t too bad for you.

I hope you will write another chapter anytime soon!

Omg will Cixi finally transform? Will she be like a unique version of ss2?

Holy crap on a crap sandwich... :O Lots of built up feelings running through Cixi and Cell here. I’m kinda wondering how this will affect them both from now on. Probably not in a good way.

It was nice to see the diary come back into play, but damn. O_o I liked this chapter. It feels like all the characters are just on the edge of some kind of discovery or tragedy. I think this was a good chapter for Cixi especially, with her growing rivalry with Cobalt and how she seems to be getting more vicious as time goes on. Is Cell’s influence finally starting to negatively affect her? I guess we’ll see.

Love it keep up the good work

...haha, Cell is getting a bit of the challenge he yearns for...but he hates the fear that any potential challenge brings with it... Yup, Cell certainly is a complicated guy!

Always glad to see updates on this story. One of my favorite AU stories on this site! :)

I have read all the chapters in like 10 days, and I must say that it is one of my favorite AU fan fictions ! Cell and original Dragon Ball characters are spot onyou’ve really understood their personality as they never acted OOC. And your original characters are as good and fascinating as the non- ones, not only Orey and Cixi, but also Sleet and every secondary character. It makes your fiction believable. Also, you seem to like thrilling/horror-themed fictions and it reflects in your fiction wellyou know how to build tension and you describe thoughts and
the internal conflicts that happen within your characters’ heads quite well. It makes them relatable, even the villains such as the road thief and the cultists.
In short, your story is well-written and I hope that, despite life priorities and matters (Family, Work, Health, etc.) you will update as soon as YOU can. Don’t put pressure upon yourself to write chapters quickly.

I keep checking to see if new chapters are up...this story is so good (and original), it's worth any wait!

Woo hoo, been gone from this site too long. XD

I'm glad to see some new characters that I was hoping to see. The reunion at the end was very touching, and it's going to be fun to see how exactly this reveal will play out. I was really happy to see the introduction of a Cell Junior into the story, and the quick rivalry between him and Cixi was nicely written and well under way to become something amazing.

Damn Citi was badass.

Awesome story, what a great read so far. I like what you've done with this AU and I love all the interesting new characters. I can't wait to see how it concludes. Great writing, and thanks for the great content!

-Murr