| Reviews for Ultimate Assassin |
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John Lanford chapter 2 . 4/24/2018 You have a good idea for a fanfiction, all you have to work on is your grammar. |
Saintsrow10 chapter 3 . 1/18/2017 Please update this story |
Ohlivia.smith chapter 3 . 11/7/2016 update please this is amazing please please continue soon :) |
persin chapter 3 . 2/9/2016 One: yes, two: ITS BEEN ALMOST TWO YERS HURYY UP! |
persin chapter 3 . 9/14/2015 Yes he must kill! |
person chapter 3 . 8/24/2015 Make more soon plese |
EnderBlazeHybrid chapter 3 . 4/22/2015 Hey, I think its time to update... or it was about a year ago :p. Its a fantastic storyline and you should definatly continue it. And you should let him assasinate someone or mabey more after he gains their trust. That way they can help him away from killing after they got over the shock (which may cause them to reject him temporarily) Good luck and please update man, dont let this story go to waste... |
Toshiro Roman chapter 1 . 1/11/2015 LOL! I loved this chapter! Damon calling Sam/Nova glow stick ha! That's hilarious! You know, that reminds me when Tony called Loki's scepter 'the glow stick of destiny' in the Avengers Assemble movie! It was so funny! I loved this chapter, I love Damon and how you describe him, excellent work! You deserve a pat on the back! Well done!-Captain America-Winter Soldier. |
Toshiro Roman chapter 2 . 1/11/2015 This was really good. I liked it. I loved that you put in really good description of the characters. By the way, Eddie Brock has Blonde hair and blue eyes. At least I'm pretty sure he does. I read something about him having that eye color and hair color online. But, hey, who knows? The internet lies sometimes. Another great chapter. I loved it. I also loved the conversation between Desmond and Damon. It was funny! Great job with this one!-Captain America-Winter Soldier. |
Toshiro Roman chapter 3 . 1/11/2015 Please update this story! It is amazing! In the 4th chapter, you should make Damon tell Spidey (only him) about his family. Like, Desmond and how he died. That would be so amazing! I also spotted a few spelling mistakes. I liked how you used the chibis and the only Peter point of view. You did a good job with that. I didn't see any punctuation mistakes; I may have to look back on that though. Other then that then, you're good! Nice job! Hope you update soon! If ya can, will you please update by the end of February? Thanks!-Captain America-Winter Soldier. Ps: Would you like for me to draw Damon for you and send you a link of him? |
MasterSpecter chapter 3 . 1/7/2015 Please continue |
scarlettravencrove chapter 3 . 9/9/2014 Hope you continue |
DannyPhantom619 chapter 3 . 6/18/2014 Awesome |
DJRobinson403 chapter 3 . 4/21/2014 Are you going to come out with more chapters? I really love the story. You can see you worked hard on it, so please come out with more. |
ArkonWinfel chapter 3 . 1/7/2014 what are Azreal's weapons? He must be better equipped than JUST hidden blades. maybe a silenced firearm? you should also bring the assassin team(shawn, rebecca, and william miles) to help with templars. Also, since Desmond is dead, Juno is out there somewhere. She could be the main villain. |