I legitimately cannot find a complaint here. Which is... unusual. Normally I can find at least one thing to dislike. Hmm... you've successfully managed to stump me. Well done.

This was beautiful, truly a work of art. I will forever remain a fan of this ship. Never forgetting the moments they shared and how close they became.

It truly breaks my heart when I read works such as yours because this is what should have been. The moments shared between the two was superb. I loved how Naruto’s “confession” led to their first kiss. The emotion you conveyed in your writing is in a league of its own. You’ve got some serious talent, I feel inspired.

I’m in the process of writing one myself and hope that one day I’ll be just as good as you.

love it! i want more!

I feel so warm right now...my heart is fluttering, your writting is so lovely. Im sure i'll be coming back to this

Love it! You really know how to show the readers your story through the subtleness of your words. This has to be one of my favourite NaruSaku fics. Looking forward to reading your other works!

This is so beautifully written 3 I was smiling the entire time.

Marvelous writing. The descriptions are really evocative. It's lovely the way you have focused on little things to bring out the nuances of their evolving relationship. Just loved it.

Very good writing here. It is simple story, but one of the most complicated to narrate and you did a wonderful job here. I completely love this one. Thanks for sharing it!

That was wonderful. Thank you. I usually read a lot of stories that I find overly sentimental, but this I found much more honest.

That was touching and sweet.

What a beautiful little fanfiction. This is so artfully written that I enjoyed it more than most romances I've read. The disjointed nature of it did not feel broken at all. In fact, it made it even more sweet and exciting because I had no idea what to expect next. The way you built it up to a kiss (I'm assuming!) without actually showing that is great because we get to imagine exactly what we want to, just like I imagined it being a kiss ahaha. Great job, phenomenal writing, and beautiful show of these characters' growth over time without any wordiness or drawn-out imagery. You just weaved something eloquent from beginning to end. I also love how you focused on Naruto's more awkward, inexperienced side. I think a lot of authors forget about this, but it's exactly what makes me love NaruSaku so much. They're both just dreaming sweet hearts who are stumbling into each other's arms. It's so adorable and real and full of heart that I can't NOT love it. Thanks for depicting NaruSaku EXACTLY the way I always imagine it. Great job, instant fave :)

I really appreciate light-hearted NaruSaku fan-fictions because there's so little.

Wow..that really struck close to my heart.. I love the story..loved your depiction of narusaku..and sakura seemed so realistic..it was amazing without a doubt..

It was sweet. Very. It was also pretty nice. I've been feeling down for some time now(no idea why, since nothing of note happened to me) and it brought a smile to my face. Thanks ;) It's nice to see a quality oneshot nowadays.

this story is very sweet. i liked it! :)