Good luck just take your time

Ha dead mans chest reference

Oh my gosh not going to lie I got excited when I got a notification for this story since you going to rewrite this story please don’t delete this one this is my fav and I’m definitely going to read this rewriting one

I hope she tells Ed or Al that she has the Philosopher's Stone inside her leg

I just have to say, damn. from start to finish this story was a ride and I loved ever second. I’m enamored and I’ve never been so excited to read a sequel!

Could. Not. Stop. Reading.

Holy hell this was amazing.

Why do I have a feeling that Alexis And Al are gonna be together?

Lexie is so cool!

I've just finished reading this and all I can say really is wow.
Such a wonderful story, thank you so much for taking the time to write this I really was exited reading every chapter and can't wait to see what trouble Lexie manages to get herself into in the sequel:)

I think you have a programming error, there are a lot of broken paragraphs and lots of '/'s that don't seem to fit in. Great story so far, though,

Al: So how are we going to catch it
Me: With a Pokeball :D

Is it weird I like to call Sheska the 'Shiskabob'

This was a absolutely thrilling story! I loved it! I can't wait for the sequel

I'm liking this overall but I didn't like the using Chuck thing. I don't think it was a terrible idea it's just not how I would have handled it. But good overall.

what?...What?...WHAAAAAAAAAAT!? THATS IT!? Man what a ride Man i feel really bad for Lexie right now, after everything shes been through and she still gets the short end of the stick and now everyone she knows and loves are afraid and ashamed by her now. well I guess I'm just going to have to wait for the sequel to figure out what happens next...DAMMIT! :)