NUUUUUUUUUU AUTHOR! COME BACK! UPDATE THIS FANFICTION ALREADY! I'M SICK OF WAITING! ITS ALREADY 2018! AUTHOR!

I especially liked Yuki Nagatos development and well... I hope to for the other characters to see Keimas side of the supernatural. Again though thank you

Its been a while but I would just want to say that this is a really enjoyable fanfiction and Im lookin for the resolution or the end game from 2 gods. Other things aside, thank you very much for writing this story, take care of yourseld and have a nice day!

vamoooos, termina la historia.
El ultimo capitulo estuvo algo flojo pero sigo deseando ver el final.

Da el ultimo empujon y termina la historia, quiero terminar de leer tu fanfic.
Te has ganado un seguidor.

Gracias por tu esfuerzo y tiempo invertidos en la historia.

This seems like an interesting read, however, until the language is fixed I will not find it in myself to read it. I have a high for crappy writing, however, when questions aren't complete, sentences not finished, the interaction not fulfilling then I find myself unable to read it. If the sentences are fixed then I will read it, the story would be compelling if not for the grammatical errors but at least you didn't do the one shit some other people do, which is to leave an annotation in the middle of the story, so that is a major plus. Good luck

lvoe this

awesome story
the characters' actions and thought prosesses' are very realistic.
i would give this story a 10/8 if i were comparing this with Harry Potter or Naruto fanfics but since i am not, i will give this story a 10/9.5 (.5 point deducted because this isn't a completed story)

PS: Sorry for bad grammar, i am haven't sleep for 26 hours

I love when haruhi is told about everything in a way that DOSENT destroy the entire world

Your story is amazing, but I do have a few issues with the number of typos. You appear to have a very good grasp of the language but your homepage says you're from the United States so you're probably just relatively young. I hope you continue with your stories, and learn to improve your spelling, and use of grammar. If you feel you don't need to improve your grammar for this story all I have to say is that it will make it more enjoyable to read, and will probably entice more readers to continue beyond the first chapter. The things I liked the most in this story include the dialogue between characters which is rarely incorrect grammatically, and the introspective approach you seem to take with your characters. Have a nice day.

nah you gotta do it like Arnold "I'll be back." in that weird accent.

haha when world's collide the true god gets angry.

oh is that Lune with her super box cutter.

there is a nice job title for a resume, God of Conquest and harem master. Employers would be thinking the hell?

hmm why Shiori though?

well you could fix some spelling errors but that is the extent of my criticism and I've seen and spelled worse at times. Otherwise really enjoying the interaction of the two "gods"