| Reviews for Revived at Birth, New and Improved |
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ChubbyNingen chapter 17 . 3/3 Please update, this is so far my fav black light crossover story |
Geoffrey297 chapter 1 . 8/11/2018 Wtf why did they just stand there while he was in their eyes in a highly dangerous situation |
Sswhitedl chapter 15 . 1/24/2018 Please finish this awesome fanfiction please lol |
Monster King chapter 17 . 7/21/2017 Great story I really liked it a shame that it looks like you gave up on it because it was getting good. |
Guest chapter 17 . 6/15/2017 And another cliffhanger end... |
Potterformers chapter 10 . 5/5/2017 lava globs translates in google translate as Yōgan no katamari |
HyperspaceGamer chapter 7 . 3/27/2017 I just knew it... Anyway, why didn't Naruto consume the two Samurai? Yeah, he doesn't particularly need anything from them, but it would get rid of having to clean up the mess, at least most of it, and it would provide extra fuel for Naruto, in the form of biomass, that he could use to heal wounds, and thus survive longer. Also, their skills and abilities would be added to his own, and while they may not be much, any little bit can help. |
HyperspaceGamer chapter 6 . 3/27/2017 For revealing such sensitive information, Naruto was an idiot to not ensure that they had their privacy. Since he can't do privacy seals, he could have at least asked Kakashi to do so, who do have the fūinjutsu knowledge necessary. It was absolutely stupid to reveal such information so carelessly. Hell, he shouldn't have even let the civilians listen in on their conversation, let alone completely ignoring privacy altogether. |
comethazel chapter 14 . 1/9/2017 Was that a dbz abridged reference you cheeky dickwaffle |
ivanganev1992 chapter 17 . 12/28/2016 Ch 17 That was Really Devastating. Naruto could consume the revived and Orochimaru and Orochimaru will be forever dead with all Memories for him. Too bad for the No Chackra but the Yoki in a way is equal of chackra and try to use it for jutsus instead Chackra . |
ivanganev1992 chapter 8 . 12/28/2016 Ch 8 Wrath of Death From Naruto and Anyone else As Angel of Death Vengeance and Salvation. |
ivanganev1992 chapter 4 . 12/28/2016 Ch 4 Does Naruto doesn't have chackra could or is just dark black chackra . |
Tempore Mortis chapter 17 . 10/31/2016 Please Do More |
Guest chapter 8 . 10/12/2016 Epic Bloodbath |
Guest chapter 5 . 10/12/2016 Cool so far |