Reviews for Victim Known |
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Guest chapter 3 . 5/19 I know it's been years, but I wish you would continue this story! |
momo29051 chapter 3 . 9/12/2014 what did you stop? I hope than you update more |
DariceF chapter 3 . 7/10/2014 Well, the outline for the story is good, but the grammar and spelling need some work. It's a good idea though! :) |
tummer22 chapter 1 . 9/6/2013 I was intrigued with this story I was looking around for something to read while the baby was napping. Istill haven't watched this season it was a little difficult to understand once I watch the episode I'll reread this. |
Guest chapter 3 . 8/29/2013 Good story, are you going to continue? Please? |
Guest chapter 3 . 8/26/2013 Please update! |
Guest chapter 3 . 8/10/2013 Please update! And if u need a beta I'll proof read it for u |
Guest chapter 3 . 8/4/2013 So heartbreaking... I hope Jane can be there for Maura. Great update! |
Redwolf chapter 3 . 8/4/2013 Fist off, I like the concept, its not easy to write an assault story, and you seem to be doing a good job of it. I hope you continue. However, the spelling and grammatical mistakes are making it very choppy and hard to read smoothly. Don't assume running a spellchecker is enough to fix any errors, because it wont always fix it to the correct word you mean to say in a sentence. In fact there are a couple of places which aren't even complete sentences. It reads like you didn't go back and inspect your work for errors. Please take that extra time to do so, and you will find several errors that can easily be corrected manually. Sometimes its hard to step back and look for critical errors, so if that's difficult for you, maybe finding a beta person who can proofread your work might be easier. Keep working on this fic, I think it has interesting places to go. |
Magicfull chapter 3 . 8/3/2013 Well done...thank u for posting, I love this story |
TreeHill5Ever chapter 2 . 7/31/2013 Please continue this story! I like it alot! |
67blackbelt chapter 1 . 7/30/2013 Keep it coming! |
Becca Bell chapter 2 . 7/25/2013 This is great but why can't people learn to edit? Jeez. Typos everywhere! Makes it distrating to read. Still great though, I just suggest to read through the chapter before posting. |
paramedic chapter 2 . 7/25/2013 This is a good story please continue...can not wait for the next chapter. |
PBeagle chapter 2 . 7/25/2013 Gotta have more to read this is good and different from the espisode and please tell me that Maura was not rape if she is then Jane's going to be sleeping and cuddling her so she could feel safe. Hope it won't affect their sexual as bad as most rape do trigger memory |