An interesting angle. A tad bit curious about what would happened next to the other characters. And what they'd think about what was going on with Sakura.

I KNEW something was off... You had me for a moment there, at the beginning though.

Well. A sad ending, but ultimately hopeful? Maybe Sasuke will be happy with the Mangekyou, and go back to Konoha? Nice fic.

Damn, this story was unusual (in a good way). Back in chapter 1, I suspected that things were off because there were four people in team 7 and Sakura was no stranger to multiple personalities...you took the premise to such a tragic end, though ;_;

Also, for what it's worth, I liked how creative "Ino" was with her fighting style - taking the arms of the Sound ninjas was pretty clever.

Hmm, I figured it out early on in this chapter. I'm just curious if you prefer this version or the Superman version?

This was really unexpected. The childish voice in the first couple chapters left me unprepared for the truth, as revealed in chapter three. Ino was terrifying. Sakura was just sad, but I'm glad she had some control at the end. I wonder what Sasuke will do now. Thanks for sharing this! It was definitely worth reading.

Wow! That was pretty disturbing. Having said that, it was an interesting idea and you pulled it off brilliantly. I suspected split personalities from Kakashi's talk with Sakura after her first kill but I wasn't expecting Ino to be quite so ruthless(/evil!). I'd say Konoha's decision to lock her up was definitely the right one; although it's interesting that one personality could be suppressed indefinitely with a seal. Poor Naruto and Sasuke must be ridiculously confused (and devastated). It'd be interesting to read about the aftermath but I suppose this is a good place to end it. Even if it doesn't feel quite complete. Thanks! I enjoyed myself with this story.

Pretty sad ending, I think this story would fit better under tragedy than its current genre description.

wow, I didn't get what this fic was about until the conversation with Kakashi, pretty cool idea, the inner idea taken to its extreme, and the most grim direction possible... poor Hinata.

at first when I was reading, i thought it was weird how sakura described everything around her in a really simplistic, detached way. i thought it was due to the author's limited writing ability.

holy shit how wrong was i

chapter 3 was the biggest bomb shell I've ever seen and everything suddenly made sense and I feel stupid for not catching it before

thanks for proving me wrong about your writing ability!

This seriously feels... incomplete. It badly needs an epilogue to give things a bit of closure.

I pretty much caught what was going on when Karachi still had only two bells but talked about one person going home, but it was still an excellent fic. Sakura is kind of an ideal choice for a Fight Club fusion. Now I just wish there was at least an epilogue. I was almost thinking that Sasuke had learned a lesson from Sakura's crazy and was working with Konaha to capture her and get some help though.

/SPOILER.
The Sasuke Fan Club doesn't spell that it has the tone, but after reading the story the title owns it. However, at first, I assume it's not a happy,humorous story, and the summary was hinting that. It also helps that I read the Picture of Dorian Gray ( a title that didn't spell out that the story is creepy, but it tells the readers the focus or what is important to the story).
This is a cool story! My prediction was true about Sakura, and I kept on reading because I want to know if the prediction was correct. I really like your Sakura. :) I like the story!
My prediction was born after I read some scenes that prove that Ino was creepy and didn't use her family techniques.
In the beginning, I was like 'four genins in a team? Sure. There can be exceptions. The author is exercising creativity. Ino and Sakura are such cute friends. Maybe, Ino is needed to be there for Sakura."
I like the ending. I see this story as a close parallel to canon, so I expected that the story of the main character to be short. Evidence found by the show: Oto ninjas die. Sound five is dead.
The scenes in chapter 4 where Sakura is absent are left to the reader's imaginations, and I expect that the scenes with Ino are creepy.
The story has got me thinking on how Sakura will be remembered. To me and of course Naruto (Woot! I'm so happy that he always remembers that ninjas are people. I was cheering for him to save her. He did, in my opinion.), she is good teammate.
It's ironic that the villagers, who were warding Naruto away from, were afraid that the demon fox would possess the boy, but it's Sakura who was possessed.
Gosh! I like your Sakura and your choice to make it her point of view. It's like I'm reading the Mystery of Sakura Haruno.

At first I thought this was just a stupid, badly written story with Ino joining team 7 and basically being better at Sakura than everything. But when they hospitalised her I had one of those Sherlock moments (hugely late but whatever) and I was like daaamn. Very impressive story.

This ending doesn’t really feel complete, though it’s certainly a lot better than it could have been. There is some resolution, and it makes sense that the story ends here, but I wish that I knew why all this had happened, and that Sakura had actually been able to accomplish something.