Aww they fall asleep as though into drift! This was really great, I loved how they kept bickering even while getting the freak on (helluva euphemism, that!) :D

I'd like to say that this was incredibly well written. The two were very in character, I think, which is something I really adore that some writers are able to do. And I think that because you were trying to avoid the whole sexual aspect of it, you made it sound even better than if you made it more inappropriate sounding. So kudos to you dear, you did a wonderful job on this story.

amazing and newt's pants! so great.

Oh my God. That was just. So. Damn. HOT. And cute at the same time. And smart and funny. They are both so in character. Just wow. Thank you for this story!

I loved how they kept bickering at each other the entire time, they really felt in character. Great job

This was just so perfect, I'm glad someone wrote fanfic for these boys. Newt trying not to hurt Hermann's leg was so cute! The cherry on top of a wonderful story. 3

Even if you typed it at 5am, It still came out amazing I absolutely loved this one, and you kept them in character perfectly I'll be sure to check out any other fanficitons you write