Your story has been one of the best I’ve read on this site/app and I just wanted to know when are you going to add another chapter. There is still a lot you can do and I enjoyed your take on all of the character even the sword spirits.

Sometimes you need a little conflict to more the story along!

I think this is the 15th or 20th time I have reread this story, "The reason I keep coming back is the story is gut wrenching (That's a good thing!)

I love a story that grabs ahold of you and pulls you into it!

I would love to see the very last scene amo!ana animated...

I will admit you use Nell to comedic effect quite well

I've lost count of how many time I've re-read your story at this point. I will say this, I like the way your willing to write beyond what the characters were in the anime..

This is very quality material. Entertaining from start to finish. Wish it was finished but there is enough to fill the rest of my imagination lol.

Awesome

Hi there! I love this fanfic. I also had an idea, an embarrassing one, but funny. While Ichi and Yoru are... busy, Shinji and Kisuke accidentally walk in on them, and Kiskuke just pulls out his smartphone and records secretly. That's my idea, embarrassing but funny.

My Favorite Female Arrancar Is Neliel(Nel)!

I absolutely love this story and I’m not gonna lie. I also love the pairing ichigo x yoruichi, I’ve read this so many times over and over because I can’t get enough of this story even tho it’s not finished. If you ever came back to write more I’d wish you just kept it ichigo x yoruichi, Instead of yoruichi’s Zanpakutō (“Ju “ that’s her nickname) wanting ichigo also, if so you should just give her a kiss with ichigo and make her fall in love with Shiro or something, I really enjoy yoruichi x ichigo and there is not that many stories about them, and I’d legit be hurt if you made it a threesome. But i still love the story and if you ever came back that’d be the best this story is amazing!

chorei muito na historia

The whole damn story is amazing, I love how you put a unique twist on a somewhat cliche story (not saying it’s bad because it is far from it) you made sure the characters kept their personalities and added so many good twists. Best of all, the cause and effect was fucking great! You made sure that each event was connected so well and that everything was easy to piece together. This is a lot better than a lot of books I’ve ever read and in my opinion, should be animated lol. Great story, definitely my favorite fanfiction, I’ve read fanfics that are great but this just beat them all by far, I’ve never wrote a review but I felt such a strong need to for this story. Your writing skills are definitely amazing. I really hope you continue this or just continue making stories in general, this was too good to ignore.

Good story

Amazing story