your characterization was super vivid! i really enjoyed it and would love if you decided to expand. it was lovely, great job! xx

:D Yay! You're the first person I read to acknowledge the fact Ed and Ling are in-laws and Ed's reaction is how I pictured it. XDDDDDD

Love this story and enjoyed every piece of it.

Keep on Writin' and Rockin'

Actually, this seemed pretty good to me. I'm not sure what inconsistencies you were talking about. And they all seemed pretty IC.

Whoa-Shadow

Oh my god, this was amazing! You only have two reviews? That is unacceptable! This story is soooo good!

OMG PERFECT **
Loving it it was so good. I really like your writing style.
*saves story*
I SHALL RE READ IN THE FUTTTUUURRRREEEE HAH AHAHA *le kawaii smile*
I hope you write more lingfan
*imagines ling on a fan*
XD
Lingfan is my otp _
-Dotdodot
Ps. Please read my lingfan. It has no reviews ;_;

this story is really good keep up the good work