What th heckadoodle! This was the best thing I've read in this fandom! Coherent, cute, plausible, your wiring was wonderful! I thoroughly enjoyed myself and I hope you write more in the future.

This. Is. AMAZING. I'm something of an artist, sooooo... Could I maybe, make a comic of this? Please? I probably will never post it and I'd credit you. I might change a few things as well, cause I'm like that. I don't mean to bother you, just this an amazing fanfic. I would really appreciate being able to use my talents to make something worthwhile. Thanks, even if you don't respond. Bye.

Aww. I love these stories of Will and Half interacting before Will's apprenticeship. This one is especially amazing. Great job!

AAAHHHHHHHHHH THIS IS AMAZING! Oh my gosh, I love this so much! I won't gush for ages and bore you by repeating the same stuff over and over, like how bloody awesome this is and how much I love how you made this all make logical sense, but this is just outstanding!

Awww this was so cute! Excellent writing and good plot too! I really liked the way that it showed that Will was scared of the Rangers before he joined, because I feel like that's sometimes glossed over. This was awesome!

I like this one. Very good portrayal of the characters and excellent wording.
Plus it's just an awesome one-shot! :)

Loved it! That was very well written.

The title for this one caught my eye, and the story didn't disappoint. I love reading about Will and Halt interacting, especially when it borders on sweet like this one does.
I can't help wondering if Halt had tried to check on Will at the castle and got worried when he couldn't find him . . .

I liked your story. Just your conclusion at the end you could have drawn out a little bit more. The last paragraph, I mean. Of course Halt is helping Will but Will's sudden conclusion that Halt is a kind sorcerer after he was afraid of him just a few sentence above was a little fast to me. I would have loved a more detailed explanation (Will's thoughts) why he switched his way of thinking beforehand...
I still liked it. Thanks for sharing.
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very much like the original story in writing style. keep up the good work.

Will falls out of a tree. That's the best and most concise summary i've seen so far, If only all summaries were like yours. XD
Great short story, was pretty interesting. I find it boring when people have excessive description in short stories, but yours didn't. It was understandable easy to follow the train of thought and none of the sentences were awkward or out of place. it seems like a really basic requirement, but i find it really hard.
It's been a while since i read the books, you made me feel like going back to the series :)

The whole idea of a kind sorcerer is good, and well its great to have Will fall out of a tree

WOW! this is REEEEAAAALLLY good! i love it! personally i would have done it during Wills apprentice days cuz that means more Halt and Will mentorship stuff happening lol. (plus halt could have thrown in some creative insults :D lol). i think the way you did 'young Will' is amazing! very real how he was apprehensive about Halt being a ranger. definately write more one-shots, you're very talented at them

Your writing is of wonderful quality, if I do say so myself. I saw very little spelling errors, and the only thing that I saw was this: "Oh, so that was why his arm hurt so much, Will thought to himself." If Will was thinking it, then he wouldn't have referred himself as he, but instead I. However, the story alone is wonderful and is a simple but effective little drabble. I think that the size was perfect, and that this was actually better than a short story than it would have been as a long and drawn out one. That is simply because it sometimes is best for the imagination to take over afterwards. I really loved that this was set before Halt became Will's mentor, as I could really see something like this happening. Why wouldn't Halt check in on the boy he saved from time to time? He must have if he knew that Will was still a good choice for to be his apprentice, am I right? And the ending sentence really resonated with me. A kind sorcerer. That part was really sweet for some reason. Great job, and keep writing!

"Wills efforts to slow or halt"
Oh the irony haha