| Reviews for A Short Story About Paul And Weddings |
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mugiwara-no-lucy chapter 1 . 12/20/2017 Even though I can't see Paul with anyone (Or used to) you made this pairing cute! Nice work! |
booo chapter 1 . 11/8/2013 booooooooooo |
writlings chapter 1 . 7/30/2013 YOU. REALLY. ARE. THEBEST. Like, seriously. :'D And here is my promised "fuuullllll" review (Mind you, this is only because tomorrow's exam got postponed. And I'm high.): Glass of bubblies *snatches from Paul* Y U BE SO GLARE-Y? You silly goose Paul, can't you do it just for once? Yeah, penguin suits aren't your style but... DEAL WITH IT! :D DO IT FOR DRREEWWWW And Gary too, before he becomes all pout-y. XD I dunno why, but when I read the "Hey Paul!" I immediately thought of Barry. Maybe Barry had already been locked up into a cupboard before the wedding? XD By PAUL. TEAPOT STANCE! XD That is the most perfect description EVAR. EXCLAMATION MARKS. They really are monstrosities, aren't they Paul? XD Lets all use more of exclamation marks to help Paul get even moar irritated!11!1! { Her mouth opens as if she's about to give him a great big speech, and he knows if she does it'll be all about "friendship!" and "responsibility!" and "everything he doesn't give a shit about!". } XD NOOO. Don't even THINK about Evashippy, Paul! (eventhoughitsnotimpliedatallXD) Not when you have little Dawnie around. Or even Barry screaming for you to unlock the cupboard. XD *kicks Reggie out* Hahahahaha, now did that feel better, Paul? Or would you still have preferred Dawn to slap you for being an grouch-puss? Haha, maybe you DO prefer a man's touch. *shot* OH BARRY *shotshot* Excited Drew ftw. NOW DANCE IBETTHATYOU'DLOOKGOODONTHEDANCEFLOORPAUL Awwww, Paulie had dance lessons with Drewy how sweet PAUL DOES LIKE MEN THEN. :'D He wants Drreeewww Gary won't let that happen though { "I thought you'd be a two left feet ridged idiot!" } wtf no. Paulie is awesome. You be payin' a fine. YOU FLIRTY BIATCH DAWN Aren't you bold. XD { To say she's surprised when he accidentally drops her in shock is also an understatement. } *snicker* { Probably gorgeous when she's silent. Or when she's in bed. } Naughty, naughty, Paul. XD COORRNNN The ending: "I'M GONNA FINE YOU IF ALL THE GOOD SONGS ARE OVER." Barry burst into the empty hall. The party had gotten over almost five hours ago and there was just a drunk couple in the closet and strewn punch cups everywhere as the reminders of the bash earlier. ...Mine sucks even moar. Oh well... ARROGANCESHIPPYNESS FTW. And come on, you still write awesome. And it's good you can write both. I still can't manage yaoi ehehe. WHERE ARE THEM TRUCKLOAD OF REVIEWS? HWUH? ...If this was the way I reviewed any other author's story, I'd probably have already been carted away to a mental hospital. But it's you so I've gone ALL OUT. :D Plus, I need to work off the caffeine. Bouncing off of walls doesn't really help. XD OFF TO THE NEXT ONE THEN |
shel-belle chapter 1 . 7/24/2013 Aww, Drew was adorable. And, yeah, I thought Paul would be a left-footed idiot too. So sweet of him to suffer through dancing lessons for the happy couple. Great work and the corniness adds to the charm. |
Iloveikari chapter 1 . 7/21/2013 I'm crying from corniness and fluffiness. This was reall good. I think the ending was good so don't worry about it. I liked the part where Drew got Paul to dance. I somehow can't see Paul Grinning and all but its funny to imagine it all. XD |
Guest chapter 1 . 7/21/2013 aw this was sooo cute! |