This was absolutely incredible. Extremely well written and spot on characters with an OC that is interesting and strong but also vulnerable. Can't wait to go check out your other story!

Interesting

Hay! Absolutely love the story so far! Just a quick little note, I think you may have uploaded the wrong chapter for 10 XD lol it skips from them leaving the basement after the formal right to several events after the beginning of season 2, then chapter 11 is correctly after the season 1 finally, with them at the hospital... if that makes any sense... so we really didn’t get to read what happened during the finally :) I’m definitely loving this so far tho & absolutely planning on reading both fics!

How is she a junior she’s 18?

I LOVE this series, it sticks to the story while not being overly attached. I absolutely love how long the chapters are and i appreciate how much work you put into this

I'm sorry, but someone needs to say this.
It's First Line not First String.

I live for relationships that start with hate

UGH

they give me life!

Yo yoyoyoyoyoyoyoyoy YO!
Ive been dying to find a decent derek x oc story and i think i found it! Oh i love it already! I cant wait to read all of it!

She's shaken by the mountain lion . . . not so concerned that the mysterious Derek Hale was dying in the back seat of the Jeep last night . . . lol hehe Yep.

And there we go. This fairly normal set of circumstances culminating into a terrifying encounter in an empty school in the dark. Stiles and Scott are tactless! omg Just shouting stuff like Riley was already in on the secret - bewildering to someone who has no clue.

A "dead body" in the backseat of Derek's car. Stiles sarcastic suggestion that Riley be placed in the trunk. Derek glowering and annoyed, doing nothing to help the situation.

And now the dead body . . . walked away . . . and is prowling around the parking lot. haha Poor Riley. Poor Riley's sanity. This'll be fun.

Furious? Derek makes her furious? Oh, Riley honey. Are you sure that's the word you wanna use, here? hehe

Stiles can't lie worth a damn lol

Derek though. Jealous and enraged by Stiles' affection for Riley is the kicker. Absolutely. That draw is THERE. She can irritate him as much as she wants. But the banter between them was just icing on the cake. Poisoned and in pain, Derek could snark with the best of them! haha

Riley liked OLDER men . . . haha foreshadowing.

Sorry! I meant to review sooner, but I was already a few chapters in and this meant backing up.

Bonus? I get to reread and catch stuff I may have missed. Downside? N-O-N-E.

STILL can't believe Riley actually agreed to tutor Stiles after that little show in Algebra. Those words, though: "His immaturity was a turn off." nails it. Riley's cool but emotionally she's too grounded for a Stiles-anything . . . I mean, if age wasn't already an issue. lol

He'd exhaust her very, very quickly.

Derek, on the other hand . . .

She's met just about everyone, but it's Derek's introduction that is most significant - to me at least. Their first meeting, the first time she looks into his eyes and her scent catches in his throat. omg

This story was incredible! Off to the next one!

"Creepy-ass-motherfucker" I couldn't help but read it in Samuel L Jackson's voice X'D

love the story but when is ry and derek going to kiss?

great story and im off to read the next :D