| Reviews for Long Road Ahead |
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  Fan chapter 4 . 7/14 can you do it from percy's and annabeth's point of view |
| all about hope chapter 12 . 6/18 Here I am, reviewing a story from 2013. No offense, but you must be old. Sheesh. I was, what, in kindergarten when you wrote that? Now I’m in the seventh grade! I hated reading. Like a lot. Now it’s all I do. Read read read read, my mind says to me. It’s really annoying. Anyway, this story is still amazing to me. Still. Freaking. Amazing. Like, wow, how did you do that? Have you ever gone back to a story you thought was so good and had the best grammar and punctuation - and then, looking at it, it looks like a kindergartner wrote it? That happened to me. I used to write like this in sixth grade: “Hi mom.”I said. Now, as a seventh grader, I write like: “Hi, Mom,” I said, cheerfully smiling. It makes you realize how much your writing has improved. Like, a lot. Anyway, I’ll end my rant now. ‘A room without a book isn’t like a body without a soul.’ |
| Guest chapter 19 . 11/10/2019 This is so good! But Annabeth’s stepmothers name is actually Helen |
 n0 oNe 1istEn chapter 2 . 10/10/2019 'This is good so far,' I think as I read this fic from 2013 and review pointlessly... |
| Guest chapter 27 . 7/29/2019 Good |
| Greta Mammalito chapter 9 . 1/25/2019 I really like your story. I have never heard a story from Paul's P.O.V! |
| Guest chapter 2 . 1/13/2019 amazing! |
| Guest chapter 15 . 9/13/2018 I’m not sure if you still read these but I think your stories are amazing and you are such a talented writer. I would love to be able to write like that, I might even do well in an English paper Anyway thanks for adding such amazing things to the Ercy Jackson world |
| Guest chapter 12 . 7/7/2018 Oh my god I just finished reading The Burning Maze today and I also just finished crying my eyes out (I spent four years obsessing over Percabeth and Jasper/Jiper okay? I can't help but NOT be emotional if Piper breaks up with Jason and then Jason freaking DIES to save her *sobs*), so when I read Jason's name I felt like crying again. WHY RICK RIORDAN WHY |
| Guest chapter 28 . 5/12/2018 Really good job well written |
| macytayyy chapter 28 . 3/10/2018 Oh my gods! This is am absolutely beautiful fanfiction! I love how talented you are. Great job. |
| Carlyn858 chapter 29 . 3/5/2018 I.. Loved. This. So good! So realistic and well written. Thank you! |
| Tilty.bbb chapter 28 . 1/28/2018 Fantastic read well done |
| AnnaUnicorn chapter 9 . 1/11/2018 Sally started breakfast, gathering the ingredients to make her infamous blue waffles. Infamous means they're known for being bad |
| Lucie Osborne chapter 19 . 12/27/2017 I facepalmed myself when Percy told Mr. Chase that he wanted to sleep with Annabeth but the rest was sheer art |
