(cackle) "Crossing legs, away from you, yes, that means I do not want to interact with you." Yes, I've been next to people like that on planes. I love Sark's impatience in this. Great stuff.

great imagery. i really liked the dream, and I hope you add a few more chapters soon.

Once again you have captured Sark like no one else. Perfect characterization, amazing attention to detail, and beautiful writing. Perfect.

Great Sark characterization again, of course. I loved the snarkiness in his head as the woman badgers him...especially the comments about body language. And little red corvette! Hee!

-Lara

Oh yes, I adore this. May I just say that you write Sark so well, it just leaves me needing more. And I need more! Please send us a new chapter-Soon!

Wow. Wow, wow. That was awesome, as always. What more can I say? You write Sark amazing. :::sigh:::

Rach,

Sark, baby. No, this is truly wonderful. Your Sark is fantastic, so layered, and there's more to him than meets the eye... that's what I love about him.

Apart from that, the whole dream sequence just made me go "whoa". Oh yeah.

Diana

I'm a sucker for dreamfic, of course, but I really liked Sark's dream. What I love about your Sark (and if the show-Sark doesn't measure up, JJ and I will be having a talk) is that he's a multiple levels kind of guy. Whether its his everyday thoughts and the parentheticals, or his dream with all the different stuff happening...Sark is a Type A thinker, and I can't get enough of him. :)

yet another unparalleled trist into the mind and manner of the one mr sark... loved as always. i couldn't help but laugh at the interaction with his seatmate, it was just too easy to picture his frustration. and the dream. my god. and rach, you picked the perfect car to splurge upon, and the perfect accompaning song (maybe i'm a little biased? i adore corvettes... my daddy even has a "little red corvette" now *broad grin*). even still. adored it. so now that we have the prequel, do we get more of "fourteen days"? i've been waiting...

Oh, I am the luckiest girl alive. I have been waiting and waiting for more of your wonderful Sarkyness and here it is. No one writes him as well as you! Please don't makes us wait so long for more! You are fantastic!

Oh wow, oh wow, oh wow!

I am totally loving this Sark-age! The nightmare sequences were fantastic, the oh-so talkative womsn perfectly annoying... Oh this is very nice!

Super work!

Me love! But you know that already.

Yay to Sarkney!

a prequel? you haven't even finished the original one! i was waiting for an update on that! but...

wow! this is great rach, you really now how to write sark :)

Oh Rach, another brilliant Sark piece! Could ya just, say, quit your day job and move to LA and become JJ's Sark-Consultant? Because yours is the Sark I want to see this fall.

But about the story, loved it. Love his annoyance at his seatmate, love his inner dialog and love the seatmate, she was a pill. ;-) Loved the line about Australia.

The dream was great, so vividly drawn. And it all leads us the beauty that is Fourteen Days. :::sigh:::

Made my whole day, thanks. :-)