| Reviews for Matters of the Heart |
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ronnyangel88 chapter 5 . 1/12/2014 omg this story is so good can you please continue and update real soon pretty please |
patty chapter 5 . 1/2/2014 Update it please?I Love it. |
Josephine chapter 1 . 9/5/2013 Sorry wasn't able to finish my last review ill just pick up where I left off: guessing. Maybe add in another villain or other side challenges/ thing I advise is to make a plot sequence chart or an outline of the story to make sure you don't run out of ideas or don't know what to write. Okay so this is totally a suggestion and no hard feelings I you don't like it- have someone else wake Kurt, up but Kurt is not the same ... He's slowly... (dying , I don't know you can do what ever you'd like) Kurt's having dreams/nightmares. Knows that wasn't the right person. As I said totally a shot in the dark I will have no hard feelings if you don't use any of my suggestions. My main goal is to just send you my support and tell you that the story has just begun so don't fret that there aren't many reviews or followers. Just do your part and the results will come rolling in. Courage - Blaine |
Josephine chapter 1 . 9/5/2013 Hi it's me again. I love how you intertwine songs into the chapter not other fanfiction has that. Absolutely brilliant! I look forward to more exiting chapters so here are some ideas to mabey help you along: mabey sort of branch away from the story line of Sleeping Beauty so it's not as predictable. I personally suggest more characters to keep it interesting but not to much that it'll be confusing. Have some risks, difficult decisions, secrets, anything to keep it exiting and to have us ( readers) |
Josephine chapter 5 . 9/4/2013 I think your story is quite intriguing but also fast paced. The battle scene was really good i enjoyed it :).I think there needs to be more Klaine scenes and mystery. I hope you continue to update and I promise I will be there to read and enjoy. With love. |
DisneyFan92 chapter 5 . 9/1/2013 SO GOOD! I can't wait for the next chapter! |
psonny97 chapter 5 . 9/1/2013 This is awesome! Hope you update soon :D |
DracoUDanced chapter 3 . 8/4/2013 If only Blaine knew who Prince Kurt really was... But wow I am still blown away by all of the imagery consuming this. When you were talking about love and true love, wow, those few paragraphs were powerful. Just wow. I can clearly picture everything happening and its amazing! GREAT song chose with 'Mascaraed' by the way, I am absolutely in love with Phantom and the whole time period. Just keep doing whatever you are currently doing because whatever it is, it is working wonderfully. |
DracoUDanced chapter 1 . 8/4/2013 When I read the summary for this I thought "Holy crap this is going to be amazing!" So I clicked on it not knowing that it is based off 'Sleeping Beauty' my favorite faire-tail of all time...and I was right this is amazing. I love how detailed it is. A whole new depth is added...i must go read more |
Argentinechica94 chapter 3 . 8/2/2013 This is great! Keep going! |