Awww this was speeder, please keep writing

Its a great story and I can't wait to read more, but advice from one writer to another its best to leave comments about scenes and the like that are in the story until the end of the chapter otherwise it completely disrupts the flow of the telling. Be reading you. ;)

I think you meant compromise, not compensate.

YEAH!
FINALLY! ANOTHER WHOVIAN!
(In a different fandom, of course.)
HIGH FIVE!

Nicely done, it's really cute so far and Hwol is hilarious XD Please continue!

i enjoyed it :)

This is great and amazing and, omg I'm looking forward to more!

good chapter

Cool three chapters

DOCTOR WHO!

Hola! I really like this story so far, but there are a few things that could use improvement. You want to slow down the chapters a lot, and even if they take longer to write, it'll be very worth it. Like, how when Howl immediately figured out how to move the, uh, memory? faster, you could go from that to 'After messing about for _ Howl finally just slapped his hands on his thighs, resulting in a very painful SLAP!" or somehow just turn his trials into another paragraph. Also slow down the conversations. It'll help if you listen to other people's conversations and watch how they interact with each other. It may seem stalker-y, but it'll really help with your writing. Good luck with your story, and I can't wait for the next chapter!

WHOVIAN I SALUTE YOU!

Cool fanfic. I might consider the fanfic awesome.

Ur a great writer I would love if u kept writing ! I want to c what happens to howl and his "mistake"

Awesome.