honestly all i have to say is wow ketchup with pizza i juss wow i can't

If she can yell " oh no please don't be dead" she could surely yell "there's someone else in there", couldn't she? Ok, she's coughing and spluttering and injured and distressed, but she is still talking, so why didn't she tell them about the bald guy?

This was very well written! I am very impressed with how you delievered the story and made everything flow! It was so entertaining! Thank you for such a wonderful read!

AWESOME:D I LOVED this fanfic, so much drama and action.. Just amazing:)

Beautiful story. Very well written.

I have no ideas to offer you but please update soon

This waa so sweet and well written and I just loved it.

Id like to see a sequel where they get married & lots of lemons & how she finally gets her happily ever after

Oh come on Alianna, you are not scared right now and you could have told Brady that Paul didn't do what you thought with Rachel all those years ago, and it was all a misunderstanding, but you "had to hold yourself back from intervening in the men's row."
As for the parents, I hope they get set straight on what their sons did to Alianna. She really didn't say very much at all to those nasty parents.

Okay, he's telling her she is the strongest girl he knows but I don't think so! She spends a lot of time crying and running away and not being able to speak (e.g. Not saying there was someone else in the burning house other than Devon) of course she has an awful lot to be terrified of, I'm not saying she wouldn't be out of her mind with fear but strong? Not yet. Maybe Paul can help.
That said, I'm enjoying the story a lot, and am looking forward to whatever happens next.

I'm confused. He was never with Rachel? Then who did Alianna see when she thought Paul cheated? Was that Josh?
Good writing. I'm really enjoying the story and it is so nice to read something that is well edited, with correct grammar.

Why wouldn't she tell Devon that Danny hit her? If he is so possessive, wouldn't he be right onto Danny?
I wonder what the deal is with Rachel? If Paul didn't imprint on her, then he was just cheating on Alianna, no imprinting excuse. Hard to forgive!

Uh-oh, vampires. Run back to LaPush, Alianna!

First off WOW. Just WOW. This story was captivating. There truly is no words to describe this story. You really did capture the right angle on abusive people don't realize is in when somebody's in the kinda of relationship there are so many reasons why someone stays. That the outside world will never understand, until someone walks a mile in there shoes. People can beg you to leave tell you to leave. But in the end it only makes you pull from the people who care. All they can do is say I'm here if you ever need me. And pray they turn too you in a time of need. But this story was amazing.

I actually was going through my inbox and ran across in update for this story. And I couldn't Rember exactly where I left off in this story, so I was going through the reviews to see if I could find my. And then I finally said to hell with it, and started reading it from the beginning. And I'm glad I did, because when I read your Story's. I'm just not reading your story, but i feel like I'm inside your story sometimes I feel like when I'm reading I'm actually your characters. And other times I feel like I'm there floating in the wind watching your story unfold in front of my eye's. You are an amazing wonderful writer, and I hope we can expect many more great story's from you.

Cute story :)