Omg I really wish I could read the bath scene, I love and hate the fact I'm left on a cliff hanger I would really enjoy reading more this is one of the best Akihito and asami fanfics I read, I hope I would continue but maybe not.

Moreee pleasse!

Read this a second time.I don't know if I reviewed this the first time but Just want to say I loved this last thing Asami said something like the game is on reminded me of Sherlock Holmes saying the game is afoot.I love that romantic your smut .This helped cheer me up.

Two things I would of wished for in this story. One that it would of been longer. Two that you would of written about their vacation and the whole ordeal that occurred on the beach with the battleships. Other than that it was a really great story. I loved their confessions. Asami's confession was so beautiful as Akihito put it and sort of unexpected for Asami to say but nonetheless gorgeous. I loved how Asami's personality changed to that of a loving one but also still being him of course. That personality combination was so well put together. You did a really good job in this story. Keep up the good work.

I really love this story. It was so heartwarming and Asami's confession was so beautiful and sort of unexpected but so loving that it made my eyes tear up. Also how Asami's attitude changed to loving attitude but still himself of course was a great combination. Two things that I would of wished for is that this would of been a longer story and if you would of written about their vacation and the whole ordeal that occurred at the beach. Other than that it was really great.

Ohohoho I love this...-imagines all the smut-

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I really like it.

Woah super cute! Asami is defeated in his own game. lol Ahh I wish I could see something like this in the manga. You're understanding their personality well, I hope you write more stories.

this was a cute little story keep it up it is good

Kyaaaaaaa...aa! So cuuuteeee! I almost melted at the warmth and cuteness. Will you continue?

you know what , this is so sweet even i can't stop myself getting touched :) i kinda remember i had read these stories long time ago as well but not on . well, thanks for posting them here so i and others can read it again. good work ! cheers :)

why did you finish it here you evil person! nhe...! I loved this fic as well as the others you are a great writer don't stop no matter what! i'll be expecting more!