Jesus, Charlotte. BAD CALL HONEY OMG

OMG this sounds so cute but that last line has me worried

Sorry, but this is kind of stupid. Both her and Dean confessed to one another that they love each other and what? Instead of building up their relationship they go around sleeping with other people? I don't get this

THIS WAS SO FANTASTIC! THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR WRITING THIS YOU ARE AMAZEBALLZZZ!?&$$$

I just reread the stories again. Still in love. Don’t let anyone who continues to read the story even though they don’t like it get you down. Your writing is great and your character is real and three dimensional.

I love everything about this story. It is a real time vampire, I can’t stop reading and I’m getting nothing done. I just don’t want it to end. ️

I am not sure I like how much this deviated from the actually events of the show...

Oh, hot damn. You actually redeemed yourself a bit. Now I snooped to see if there was a sequel to this and I see that there is so! If they get married once dean gets back from hell. I’ll actually change my mind about this story.
Only if!

Oh you poor baby. You’re whole life built on lies!
Maybe you should STOP TELLING LIES ALL THE DAMN TIME AND MAYBE YOU WOULDN’T be on the receiving end!

like seriously. All the lies floating in this is making me sick. One thing Dean thrives on is TRUTH AND TRUST! Not lies, that seem to come pouring from her damn mouth every 5 seconds.

I really don’t like your character.

Can she please stop LYING! My god!

And now we have a bitchy, PMSing, immature, little girl. These stupid stuck up emotions you keep having your OC do is getting old! Like really, really, annoyingly old!

I seriously don’t know if I can continue reading this childish emotional BS.

You know, if I was reading this whilst you were writing it. I’d say you had no idea where you were goin with your OC. She’s all over the place and so is the jumpin around and cutting to different people and scenes and everything else. It’s becoming a headache to read. I’d suggest going back and editing all this to make it more clear.

Omg she’s a nephilim isn’t she? Yet, she has no abilities of one. Have you thought her through all the way?

You know. With the whole “I have a year to live.” It would be better for the two TO FINALLY QUIT THE BULLSHIT AND GET TOGETHER! I have 37 chapters left. I seriously freaking hope that happens and the bullshit stops.

Definitely an angel. Yupp. Most definitely.
Ooohhhh! Which angel I wonder