| Reviews for Don't Make a Sound |
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  not nedded chapter 1 . 3/29/2018 woah... |
| GekimugonKiller chapter 1 . 12/8/2017 Hey, this is Jay and my sister Jax! GREAT STORY! |
 DarkPheonix 666 chapter 1 . 11/23/2016 CUUUUUUUUUUTEE! Though the fact that none of the others woke up was nothing but luck |
| Riko Izya chapter 1 . 10/2/2016 I think i'm dying... holy crap this was amazing... good thing my parents or best friend aren't with me! :O |
| Guest chapter 1 . 9/25/2016 I only have one criticism, you're grammar and punctuation did bother me a bit, other than that it was great! |
| Ellie Anderson chapter 1 . 2/25/2016 I thought it was great I have been looking for a good marco x jean fanfic so this was perfect. |
| The Reviewer chapter 1 . 5/25/2015 This is a cute story but i have an issue with your punctuation. For example it's "Jean," not "Jean.", So yeah. Great story but just need to fix that and a few other things as well. |
| kinoooo chapter 1 . 12/14/2013 Loved it . I think you have written an awesome story . It would've been fun if someone would have woke up . Like you can make a second chapter for this . That'll be cool But anyways and once again love it :) |
| Sai-miyoshi chapter 1 . 11/5/2013 Woa, thank u so much for writing this :3 |
| jenkin chapter 1 . 10/5/2013 Haha it would be weird if the others were all like secretly awake the entire time. |
| Yupp chapter 1 . 8/18/2013 I saw the drawing of this on tumblr and I love this better |
| Cheese2018 chapter 1 . 7/29/2013 Is this based on a photo set? I remember a photo set exactly like this and Marco said the same thing But I loved this story! The world needs more marco and jean haha |
| Sebastine chapter 1 . 7/20/2013 that was really hot and risky. Marco is always so caring |
