I am so sorry to hear that you went through such a hard thing seeing your friend jump. I understand the story and i thank you for writing it. It must of been difficult for you to write. I know this happens and again i am truly sorry. You are very brave to write this.

wow, did not see that coming 0.0 I literally sat there going "what?!" when beca jumped. For a second a bit of anger and frustration started building inside me, but it's your stroy and your choice (especially after reading ch 5). I just hate to think that beca only heard her after she took a step. falling towards death and regretting it, I almost wish chloe showed up after she jumped, Iimagine them both to have terribly regrets about the timing. As for you, I'm sorry for you and your friend. I hope this story gave you a bit of closure and it's kind of a nice way to remember your friend.

I was not expecting that... It was an interesting story. Xx

I honestly can't read suicide stories, hits too close to home. But I read this. I like the last part you wrote in here the most. Firstly I should say you had the warnings, don't like don't read. Secondly, maybe why I read it but it seemed different, and experiences like this should never happen. This could have been alot more detailed but you capture enough of the pain to explain some reasons. Thank you for sharing this, although honestly I don't deal with this well, or at all, I'm glad you have found something like writing to express yourself.

this piece of shit of a story is very wrongly label

I've only just caught up on this story since I noticed the update then and I just want to say that I'm so sorry for everything that you and both your friends had to go through and I'm also sorry that due to slightly ignorant comments from others you felt you had to explain yourself to anybody as if everything wasn't hard enough, especially since you had already stated before, the personal attachment that came with this piece of writing. I'm not sure how much of that eulogy was the original but either way it was beautiful and you couldn't have payed a better tribute. Thank you for expressing and sharing your portrayal through these characters. I would love to see more of your work :)

I didn't like this. Beca should have just spoken to Chloe. That would have made all the difference. And c'mon, she would not jump off of a building, especially not in front of Chloe.

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so so sad! i didn't think she would really do it :(. good job.

Holy FUCK! Your story may have been short, but it was absolutely AMAZING and breathtaking! I thought Beca would've lived :( anyway, great story, I loved it! Absolutely incredible!

No no no no no no no no no no no no no! This was so awesome and now it's all no no no no she can't be dead ok?! This is not how it's support to work! I mean this fic and your writings are awesome but NO NO NO can she just be NO its just Chloe's nightmare BEca is NoT dead! Please :'((((((((( :'''''(

you should learn what angst mean because you fail at it, that was a tragedy

This is the first time I've been reduced to an ugly sobbing mess from a fic, but my god. That shattered my heart, there's no other way to describe it. I managed to keep it together until the very last line. That's what broke me. It probably didn't help that the whole time I was reading this I had "Last Goodbye" by Ke$ha playing on repeat...

no i didn't need my heart anyways it's fine

Wow I'm really sad now :( you should make an alternate ending where Chloe convinces Beca not to jump. Anyway, very well written, cried when I read the eulogy.